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short poems (31-40)
Lake
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PostPosted: 2007-08-01 11:00:25    Post subject: short poems (31-40) Reply with quote

(写多了,水分也多了。向100 首进军顾不上这许多了。)

31
through mists
looms a ridged mountain range
dragon in clouds

32
floating cream and scum
cover up undercurrents -
Dow Jones up and down

33
this is Singapore
that I’ve heard but never been
on my “to-tour list”

34
to the abacus
the computer groans and bows-
immune from virus

35
a wild gush of wind
blows water into ripples
a moon floats away

36
wild boars roam
on vast greens
grass bows to the wind

37
a lone jackal howls
to the shivering stars
a meteorite falls

38
after the deluge
a wrecked boat afloat
her master unseen

39
a Sixties disco
must’ve differed from n-ties.
You leave, I enter.

40
the Night Jay sings
to the tune of
“once in a blue moon”

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kokho
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PostPosted: 2007-08-01 11:27:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

through mists
looms a ridged mountain range
dragon in clouds
<> 这首很有气势 :)

to the abacus
the computer groans and bows-
immune from virus
<> I like this one

this is Singapore
that I’ve heard but never been
on my “to-tour list”
<> I will take leave to be your tour guide

the Night Jay sings
to the tune of
“once in a blue moon”
<> You are aware of the blue moon now Wink)


35
a wild gush of wind
blows water into ripples
a moon floats away

36
wild boars roam
on vast greens
grass bows to the wind

37
a lone jackal howls
to the shivering stars
a meteorite falls

<><><> These 3 are the real Zen Stuff Congrats you have enlightened!!!
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Lake
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PostPosted: 2007-08-01 18:59:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢 Kokho 逐首点评。

把 38 换下去了,怕引起旖旎的“瞎想”。 Razz

Enlightened? I hope I am...
But it is not that easy.
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William Zhou周道模
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PostPosted: 2007-08-02 05:30:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

so many of them are so good. I like no.37 best. thank you for your good work, Lake!
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PostPosted: 2007-08-02 06:02:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

好热闹 :)

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