莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2008-05-01 19:08:46 Post subject: 花非花—牡丹二首 |
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花非花,雾非雾。国色新,华芳妒。
春深今又动诗魂,雨落黄昏归夜幕。
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花非花,雾非雾。笔付文,闲庭步。
经年潇洒牡丹神,自在轻身含傲骨。 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2008-05-02 04:12:47 Post subject: |
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春深今有动诗魂,
雨落黄昏归夜幕。
欣赏! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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暗香如沁 秀才
Joined: 14 Jan 2007 Posts: 885 Location: 北京 暗香如沁Collection |
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松云老人 秀才
Joined: 11 Apr 2008 Posts: 376 Location: 中国 松云老人Collection |
Posted: 2008-05-02 07:06:46 Post subject: |
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春深今有动诗魂,
雨落黄昏归夜幕。
确好! |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2008-05-03 00:03:04 Post subject: |
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黄洋界 wrote: |
春深今有动诗魂,
雨落黄昏归夜幕。
欣赏! |
谢谢黄老点评,问好! |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2008-05-03 00:04:59 Post subject: |
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谢谢暗香姐点评,问好! |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2008-05-03 00:06:19 Post subject: |
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松云老人 wrote: |
春深今有动诗魂,
雨落黄昏归夜幕。
确好! |
谢谢点评,问好! |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
是有缘Collection |
Posted: 2008-05-04 18:58:45 Post subject: |
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喜欢一。 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意 愁云化雨是有情 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2008-05-05 15:47:33 Post subject: |
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谢谢关注! |
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