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七言绝句——忧思
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PostPosted: 2007-07-21 19:52:21    Post subject: 七言绝句——忧思 Reply with quote

忧思

昨夜一梦月光来
落得床头心忧忧
别故乡愁千浪涌
唯梦不断月又圆

问天

我斟杯酒来问天
天公几时能对饮
莫笑红尘我痴情
谁知酒杯倾红颜
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PostPosted: 2007-07-21 20:20:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

一言一梦一月光,落得床前亮堂堂。欢迎常来古韵走走,老朋友了。
别故乡愁千浪涌,好句!
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PostPosted: 2007-07-23 06:51:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏.格律可再推敲.
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http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~
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