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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2007-07-12 19:44:02    Post subject: 这梅雨季节让秋提前 Reply with quote

这梅雨季节让秋提前

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暴雨后,雷仍在积云背后跺脚
震落一些雨滴被风搂入怀
冰冷的白纸溅起朵朵水花

遥远的北方传回预告
你那里大旱,而我的南方水涝
这梅雨季节让秋提前

是谁左右了你的天空
女人总有倾不完的泪
从早春二月到七月昏黄

淅淅沥沥、倾盆或者阴郁
冷热交锋的情绪天空
下着失重无法着陆的雨

而一群小田鼠惊恐着爬往高处
这濒临绝堤的江河水位
我的小悲伤不想再增加高度

2007-7-12
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PostPosted: 2007-07-12 19:50:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

这濒临绝堤的江河水位
我的小悲伤不想再增加高度

不错的借寓.
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PostPosted: 2007-07-13 07:37:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣賞了!

喜歡的說~~
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PostPosted: 2007-07-14 00:32:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

小小的东西都被你写得这么有感情。。。。

狠狠地喜欢一下!!
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PostPosted: 2007-07-14 00:52:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

天人一体的情怀!
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PostPosted: 2007-07-14 01:38:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

Laughing Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-07-14 05:18:17    Post subject: Re: 这梅雨季节让秋提前 Reply with quote

半溪明月 wrote:
...
遥远的北方传回预告
你那里大旱,而我的南方水涝
这梅雨季节让秋提前

是谁左右了你的天空
女人总有倾不完的泪
从早春二月到七月昏黄

淅淅沥沥、倾盆或者阴郁
冷热交锋的情绪天空
下着失重无法着陆的雨
...

有點暈忽,那個“你”那裏到底是大旱還是淅淅瀝瀝? Confused
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PostPosted: 2007-07-14 05:54:30    Post subject: Re: 这梅雨季节让秋提前 Reply with quote

戴玨 wrote:
半溪明月 wrote:
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遥远的北方传回预告
你那里大旱,而我的南方水涝
这梅雨季节让秋提前

是谁左右了你的天空
女人总有倾不完的泪
从早春二月到七月昏黄

淅淅沥沥、倾盆或者阴郁
冷热交锋的情绪天空
下着失重无法着陆的雨
...

有點暈忽,那個“你”那裏到底是大旱還是淅淅瀝瀝? Confused


北方的你那里大旱,我这里南方水涝~呵呵,问好!
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PostPosted: 2007-07-14 06:11:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

湘妃123 wrote:
Laughing Very Happy
问好~ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-07-14 06:16:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

山城子 wrote:
天人一体的情怀!

感谢山城子老师批阅~问好! Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-07-14 06:40:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

金金 wrote:
小小的东西都被你写得这么有感情。。。。

狠狠地喜欢一下!!

呵呵,谢金金喜欢~
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PostPosted: 2007-07-14 06:48:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

阿依琼裙 wrote:
欣賞了!

喜歡的說~~

问好阿琼,呵呵~ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-07-14 06:54:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
这濒临绝堤的江河水位
我的小悲伤不想再增加高度

不错的借寓.

抱抱月光妹妹,青蛙让他见鬼去吧~呵呵! Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-07-14 07:02:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

再次來讀~依舊的喜歡!
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PostPosted: 2007-07-14 23:33:36    Post subject: Re: 这梅雨季节让秋提前 Reply with quote

半溪明月 wrote:
戴玨 wrote:
半溪明月 wrote:
...
遥远的北方传回预告
你那里大旱,而我的南方水涝
这梅雨季节让秋提前

是谁左右了你的天空
女人总有倾不完的泪
从早春二月到七月昏黄

淅淅沥沥、倾盆或者阴郁
冷热交锋的情绪天空
下着失重无法着陆的雨
...

有點暈忽,那個“你”那裏到底是大旱還是淅淅瀝瀝? Confused


北方的你那里大旱,我这里南方水涝~呵呵,问好!

那“是谁左右了你的天空”一句是否怨對方無情?無淚可灑?
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PostPosted: 2007-07-15 00:27:56    Post subject: Re: 这梅雨季节让秋提前 Reply with quote

戴玨 wrote:
半溪明月 wrote:
戴玨 wrote:
半溪明月 wrote:
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遥远的北方传回预告
你那里大旱,而我的南方水涝
这梅雨季节让秋提前

是谁左右了你的天空
女人总有倾不完的泪
从早春二月到七月昏黄

淅淅沥沥、倾盆或者阴郁
冷热交锋的情绪天空
下着失重无法着陆的雨
...

有點暈忽,那個“你”那裏到底是大旱還是淅淅瀝瀝? Confused


北方的你那里大旱,我这里南方水涝~呵呵,问好!

那“是谁左右了你的天空”一句是否怨對方無情?無淚可灑?


呵呵,你是用线把我往出牵哈,不上当~你理解的不错! Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-07-15 00:30:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

阿依琼裙 wrote:
再次來讀~依舊的喜歡!

感谢阿依能这样喜欢,这诗写完自己也不觉得多好,不过是些小情绪!
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PostPosted: 2007-07-15 05:04:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

我的小悲伤不想再增加高度
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PostPosted: 2007-07-15 05:46:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

而一群小田鼠惊恐着爬往高处
这濒临绝堤的江河水位
我的小悲伤不想再增加高度


喜欢!
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PostPosted: 2007-07-15 17:40:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

是自然的雨季还是心灵?难以辨别了,写得挺好的,学习了!
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