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[原创]微型诗:挂钟、闹钟、倒计时、踏浪
梁翼
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PostPosted: 2007-07-14 21:32:38    Post subject: [原创]微型诗:挂钟、闹钟、倒计时、踏浪 Reply with quote

诗/梦君诗画两翼

《挂钟》

摇啊摇

理想摇落地

袍袱背上身

《闹钟》

竞走光阴脉搏

敲响世纪警钟

带着羡慕目光与时俱进

《倒计时》

三、二、一

地球孵化一枚好事

外星人正在打听

《踏浪》


太阳逼我跳海


我游上岸了


烦恼还在海里


2007年7月14日
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司马策风
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PostPosted: 2007-07-15 01:26:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

初浅了写。

短诗若没有警句和佳句,很难立足。

问好
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陈若祥
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PostPosted: 2007-07-15 03:55:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

微型诗更注重哲理!
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杨海军
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PostPosted: 2007-07-15 04:17:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

继续!!!
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