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暮春的早晨

天淡云闲
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Posted: 2007-07-10 02:38:51 Post subject: 暮春的早晨

暮春的早晨（外一）文/天淡云闲清晨，在一滴露上被鸟鸣叫醒风,晃动树叶我仿佛看到暮春匆匆的背影手,伸入水流试图抓到什么流水穿越河床,昨天的一切,和不断苏醒的记忆从指间游走天若有情文/天淡云闲问天,是否有情四季的更替是不是也在额头刻下痕迹在那场春雨中可曾如我们一样困惑百年不遇的缘散落最后一颗佛珠残花的暮春雨泪蒙蒙

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Posted: 2007-07-10 03:47:48 Post subject:

沙发哦，先坐好了再读 _________________ 个人主页：http://blog.sina.com.cn/afirewang

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-07-10 08:09:43 Post subject:

欣赏,问好云闲~

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Posted: 2007-07-11 01:54:49 Post subject:

问好石头和明月,谢提读

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Posted: 2007-07-12 18:19:32 Post subject:

清晨，在一滴露上被几粒鸟鸣叫醒风,晃动树叶我仿佛看到暮春匆匆的背影再次欣赏问好云闲

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Posted: 2007-07-12 23:54:15 Post subject:

一切,和不断苏醒的记忆从指间游走 ...喜欢。

天淡云闲
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Posted: 2007-07-13 07:11:48 Post subject: Re: 暮春的早晨

暮春的早晨（外一）文/天淡云闲清晨，在一滴露上被鸟鸣叫醒风,晃动树叶我仿佛看到暮春匆匆的背影手,伸入水流试图抓到什么流水穿越河床,昨天的一切,和不断苏醒的记忆从指间游走天若有情文/天淡云闲问天,是否有情四季的更替是不是也在额头刻下痕迹在那场春雨中可曾如我们一样困惑百年不遇的缘散落最后一颗佛珠残花的暮春雨泪蒙蒙

天淡云闲
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Posted: 2007-07-13 07:12:51 Post subject:

请各位再批

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Posted: 2007-07-13 07:17:21 Post subject:

欣賞! _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

天淡云闲
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Posted: 2007-07-13 23:20:46 Post subject:

问好阿依

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Posted: 2007-07-14 01:58:02 Post subject:

这情调让人淡然 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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