聽雲館主 秀才
Joined: 03 Mar 2007 Posts: 361 Location: Canada 聽雲館主Collection |
Posted: 2007-07-04 03:10:29 Post subject: 七律 鄂爾多斯紀行之一 |
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七律 鄂爾多斯紀行之一
三月孤羈走內蒙,離離草綠過河東。
千年逝水興亡夢,萬里流沙曠蕩風。
金帳陣營殘照外,明駝行列晚煙中。?
依然健翮翔平楚,不見胡兒挽大弓。 _________________ 壇前易解拈花意 席上難逢顧曲心 |
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黄洋界 探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2007-07-04 05:28:01 Post subject: |
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读听云先生壮阔的纪行诗如亲临其境,让我有幸作了一次伸游.
馆主有之一之二,还有更多吗? |
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白水 大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-07-04 05:47:18 Post subject: |
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看来老师人在旅途, 大作充满西域风情 |
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聽雲館主 秀才
Joined: 03 Mar 2007 Posts: 361 Location: Canada 聽雲館主Collection |
Posted: 2007-07-04 19:29:05 Post subject: |
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多謝諸位詞長雅評,問好! _________________ 壇前易解拈花意 席上難逢顧曲心 |
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戴玨 秀才
Joined: 03 Jan 2007 Posts: 808
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Posted: 2007-07-14 04:02:32 Post subject: |
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好詩提讀,獻花! _________________ I labour by singing light
我的blog
我的專欄 |
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芯彤 童生
Joined: 14 Jul 2007 Posts: 11
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Posted: 2007-07-14 06:13:15 Post subject: 喜欢 |
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晓松 举人
Joined: 26 Feb 2007 Posts: 1192
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Posted: 2007-07-21 17:43:26 Post subject: Re: 七律 鄂爾多斯紀行之一 |
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聽雲館主 wrote: |
七律 鄂爾多斯紀行之一
三月孤羈走內蒙,離離草綠過河東。
千年逝水興亡夢,萬里流沙曠蕩風。
金帳陣營殘照外,明駝行列晚煙中。?
依然健翮翔平楚,不見胡兒挽大弓。 |
依然健翮翔平楚,不見有人挽大弓。 |
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