游向高原的鱼 秀才
Joined: 20 May 2007 Posts: 382
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Posted: 2007-07-14 08:08:41 Post subject: 七绝 答东篱把酒 |
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七绝 答东篱把酒
借得东篱酒半杯,
催开夏日一玫瑰。
且看郁郁风流处,
多少行人去又回! _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子,在其中认识自己。 |
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戴玨 秀才

Joined: 03 Jan 2007 Posts: 808
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Posted: 2007-07-14 23:41:50 Post subject: |
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這首七絕仄起首句押韻,格律無誤。白水測試時想是選錯“詞牌名”了。  _________________ I labour by singing light
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暗香如沁 秀才
Joined: 14 Jan 2007 Posts: 885 Location: 北京 暗香如沁Collection |
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游向高原的鱼 秀才
Joined: 20 May 2007 Posts: 382
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Posted: 2007-07-17 08:03:47 Post subject: |
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用的是英语歌the last rose of summer。 _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子,在其中认识自己。 |
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