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告月儿

刘芸
童生

Joined: 13 Mar 2007
Posts: 59

刘芸Collection

Posted: 2007-07-10 12:56:08 Post subject: 告月儿

告月儿诗/刘芸不要躲在枝头窃笑我的狼狈,今夜你不也是半弯儿? 你是千古的寂寞难消, 我是今生的落寞幽幽, 来,来,来不如咱俩牵手桂花树下醉他个不知愁谁说你冷漠无情今夜我的心事只有你最懂温柔的吻,融化刻意的坚强骨子里的柔弱赤裸罢,罢,罢入你怀抱,两个半弯儿凑他个十五的圆 _________________ 路,在延伸,脚,一直不停的走.

沙漠
秀才

Joined: 26 Jan 2007
Posts: 977
Location: 中国温州
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Posted: 2007-07-10 18:48:38 Post subject:

入你怀抱,两个半弯儿凑他个十五的圆好想像! _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

半溪明月
榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760

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Posted: 2007-07-10 19:12:46 Post subject:

独语式的语言，明快宁静~欣赏!

刘芸
童生

Joined: 13 Mar 2007
Posts: 59

刘芸Collection

Posted: 2007-07-11 05:13:02 Post subject:

沙漠 wrote:

入你怀抱,两个半弯儿
凑他个十五的圆

好想像!

问好沙漠

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路,在延伸,脚,一直不停的走.

刘芸
童生

Joined: 13 Mar 2007
Posts: 59

刘芸Collection

Posted: 2007-07-11 05:14:09 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

独语式的语言，明快宁静~欣赏!

问好半溪明月

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路,在延伸,脚,一直不停的走.

白水
大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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Posted: 2007-07-11 08:55:45 Post subject:

挺浪漫的

杨海军
进士出身

Joined: 01 Mar 2007
Posts: 2205
Location: 吉林
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Posted: 2007-07-11 18:30:54 Post subject:

入你怀抱,两个半弯儿凑他个十五的圆 _________________祝诗人愉快！多来发帖 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

阿依琼裙
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Joined: 09 Apr 2007
Posts: 920
Location: 废墟之上
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Posted: 2007-07-13 06:28:37 Post subject:

女兒的嬌羞言語淋漓表達,贊! _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

刘芸
童生

Joined: 13 Mar 2007
Posts: 59

刘芸Collection

Posted: 2007-07-13 21:47:53 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

挺浪漫的

人说，诗人都有浪漫的细胞，呵呵，问好白水：）
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路,在延伸,脚,一直不停的走.

刘芸
童生

Joined: 13 Mar 2007
Posts: 59

刘芸Collection

Posted: 2007-07-13 21:49:08 Post subject:

杨海军 wrote:

入你怀抱,两个半弯儿
凑他个十五的圆
_________________祝诗人愉快！多来发帖

问好杨海军，有空一定多来，也祝您愉快：）
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路,在延伸,脚,一直不停的走.

刘芸
童生

Joined: 13 Mar 2007
Posts: 59

刘芸Collection

Posted: 2007-07-13 21:50:26 Post subject:

阿依琼裙 wrote:

女兒的嬌羞言語淋漓表達,贊!

谢阿依琼裙赞，多批评哦，问好：）
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路,在延伸,脚,一直不停的走.

金金
进士出身

Joined: 08 Feb 2007
Posts: 2035
Location: 山东济宁
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Posted: 2007-07-14 02:04:32 Post subject:

月儿若有知，当会心一笑！ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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