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《四季》（外一首）

奥冬
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Posted: 2007-07-09 00:39:29 Post subject: 《四季》（外一首）

《四季》花儿嬉笑着追逐小狗的尾巴《今夜，有没有月》把心打个结系住一个地名每天听与众不同的天气预报 _________________ 地址: 054001 河北省邢台市天一城8-1-703 　苏晓东。博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/a10z90

刘芸
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Posted: 2007-07-09 04:36:08 Post subject:

是不是太简单了些呢? 问好 _________________ 路,在延伸,脚,一直不停的走.

天汉阿文
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Posted: 2007-07-09 05:31:40 Post subject:

2比1有嚼头。

奥冬
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Posted: 2007-07-10 17:06:27 Post subject:

谢过两位欣赏，问好 _________________ 地址: 054001 河北省邢台市天一城8-1-703 　苏晓东。博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/a10z90

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-07-11 02:18:52 Post subject:

不错！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

奥冬
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Posted: 2007-07-11 17:35:59 Post subject:

感谢欣赏，远握 _________________ 地址: 054001 河北省邢台市天一城8-1-703 　苏晓东。博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/a10z90

阿依琼裙
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Posted: 2007-07-13 06:25:46 Post subject:

我也以為有點沒有說盡的意思~~沒有發揮延伸~~ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

金金
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Posted: 2007-07-14 00:27:09 Post subject:

我喜欢《四季》，有原地旋转的感觉，棒！ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

湘妃123
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Posted: 2007-07-14 01:38:20 Post subject:

奥冬
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Posted: 2007-07-15 17:05:47 Post subject:

谢过大家的品读,一并问好 _________________ 地址: 054001 河北省邢台市天一城8-1-703 　苏晓东。博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/a10z90

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