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紫蝶

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-07-06 09:02:25 Post subject: 紫蝶

紫蝶文/半溪明月（一）作为一枚书笺前世被夹在泛潮的诗页一个形容词具有丁香的毒你的薄翼染上轻微的恙（二）今夜你抚琴而歌生命中的蝴蝶如花飞来从幽深中打捞出气质于一朵紫茉莉上噏合（三）蝶的嬗变有美丽故事毛毛虫血色浓郁当你月光下抖动稚嫩的翅膀驶往春天的火车一直往北（四）滞留在夜色与一朵花交谈花儿开得比玫瑰还要芳芬你攀折的美丽枝节是我一生追梦的诗章（五）夏日灼烤大地龟裂夜拾不起梦的露蜷伏在密不透风的房间蝶干枯成一枚脆薄的笺无能为力地碎遗落的紫 2007-7-6

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-07-06 10:37:26 Post subject:

美丽的诗情 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

nobody
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Joined: 31 Dec 2006
Posts: 2651
Location: Madtown
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Posted: 2007-07-06 13:52:07 Post subject:

半溪明月现在真是有量有质。应该可以把花在老师身上的钱从他身上赚回来。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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Posted: 2007-07-06 14:47:33 Post subject:

轻灵的, 唯美的

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-07-06 19:02:10 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

美丽的诗情

问好岛主~

金金
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Joined: 08 Feb 2007
Posts: 2035
Location: 山东济宁
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Posted: 2007-07-06 20:50:42 Post subject:

感情很深的样子，主旨的表现要想法子加强！ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

金金
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Posted: 2007-07-06 20:51:08 Post subject:

问好姐姐 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-07-08 00:09:31 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

半溪明月现在真是有量有质。应该可以把花在老师身上的钱从他身上赚回来。

呵呵，有量无质.硬凑了一首,很辛苦,算啦,先告一段落，休息休息.
老师有很多，都是免费的,不用花钱啦~问好!

我是明月
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Joined: 07 Jul 2007
Posts: 27

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Posted: 2007-07-08 00:10:48 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

轻灵的, 唯美的

问好月光妹妹~
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我是明月
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Joined: 07 Jul 2007
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Posted: 2007-07-08 00:12:07 Post subject:

金金 wrote:

感情很深的样子，主旨的表现要想法子加强！

感谢金金的指点,问好金金~
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天汉阿文
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Joined: 01 Jun 2007
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Posted: 2007-07-08 00:43:32 Post subject:

还有淡雅。

山城子
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Joined: 23 May 2007
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Posted: 2007-07-08 07:22:52 Post subject:

图美诗更美！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

天淡云闲
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Joined: 24 Mar 2007
Posts: 74

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Posted: 2007-07-08 16:38:07 Post subject:

问好明月来欣赏你的佳作

杯中冲浪
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Joined: 29 Sep 2006
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Posted: 2007-07-08 16:49:35 Post subject:

半溪的诗愈来愈好。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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