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[原创]戒指里的诗行 {我想投稿}
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PostPosted: 2007-07-02 22:06:12    Post subject: [原创]戒指里的诗行 {我想投稿} Reply with quote

古希腊传说,情侣都将戒指戴在对方的中指上,因为他{她}们相信那有根血管直通心脏……

彼此没有承诺
只有眼神后面的太阳
夜里的萤火还在窗前
它们手拉手
坐到五指中央
我 弹奏往日的晨曲
你 讲诉古老的传说
我 跳跃欢乐的舞步
你 摇叶轻舟
载着默默无语
撩开彩帘
去我跳动的诗行
隐藏萤火与太阳的光环
孤独的玉楼
没有夜晚

彼此从不表白
只听心房澎湃的涛声
坐上你的轻舟
去春天播种眼神
到秋天收割
我们共同的愿望
从南到北
孱缓一条没有季节的流水
从西到东
漫长一条广袤的路
挥手千古都抹不去
这流动的诗行


2007.7.2 晚


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PostPosted: 2007-07-03 00:30:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

豪情大气。优美流畅。可谱曲成歌。
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PostPosted: 2007-07-03 13:53:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

热情而沛然之诗!! 问候品玉诗人!!
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PostPosted: 2007-07-03 14:35:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

问候品玉女士!
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