Lake
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 fābiǎoyú: 2007-05-15 10:41:41 fābiǎozhùtí: Form |
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In a vast field
that revives the spring weeds
a green grasshopper—
wearing his own suit
to conceal himself
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kokho
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| fābiǎoyú: 2007-05-17 09:19:07 fābiǎozhùtí: |
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Good works ... this is a parable!
for a beginner like yourself it is quite an accomplishment...
 
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Lake
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| fābiǎoyú: 2007-05-17 10:43:16 fābiǎozhùtí: |
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I am glad you think it is a good one.
Yes, for a novice like me any poem born is an accomplishment!
Here is one more:
Green green!
green green green!
green green !
green green green!
green green, the grass!
Next month I'll go to Forest Lake to observe Coyotes and Bears and Wolves, Oh My!
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kino
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| fābiǎoyú: 2007-05-19 21:37:55 fābiǎozhùtí: |
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remind me of E E Cummings.  |
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Lake
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| fābiǎoyú: 2007-05-23 10:53:59 fābiǎozhùtí: |
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| remind me of E E Cummings. |
why? 
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| fābiǎoyú: 2007-05-23 23:44:44 fābiǎozhùtí: |
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Have a good trip and bring back more poems....
Red red
red red red
red red
red red Lake...
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Lake
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| fābiǎoyú: 2007-05-24 05:59:57 fābiǎozhùtí: |
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Have a good trip and bring back more poems....
Red red
red red red
red red
red red Lake...
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洪湖水 浪打浪
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| fābiǎoyú: 2007-05-28 11:38:18 fābiǎozhùtí: |
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洪湖岸边是江南。。。
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| fābiǎoyú: 2007-06-23 06:17:05 fābiǎozhùtí: |
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just the grasshopper
r-p-o-p-h-e-s-s-a-g-r
who
a)s w(e loo) k
upnowgath
PPEGORHASS
eringint (o-
aThe) :l
eA
!p:
S a
(r
rIvInG .gRrEaPsPhOs)
to
rea (be) rran (com) gi (e) ngly
,grasshopper; |
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Lake
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| fābiǎoyú: 2007-06-25 17:08:21 fābiǎozhùtí: |
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just the grasshopper
r-p-o-p-h-e-s-s-a-g-r
who
a)s w(e loo) k
upnowgath
PPEGORHASS
eringint (o-
aThe) :l
eA
!p:
S a
(r
rIvInG .gRrEaPsPhOs)
to
rea (be) rran (com) gi (e) ngly
,grasshopper; |
Thanks, here is the uncrambled.
e.e. cummings is really ginmesoth.
grasshopper
who
as we look
up now gathering
GRASSHOPPER
into-
a ‘T’ he leaps!:
arriving grasshopper
to rearrangingly
become
grasshopper
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