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好几年前的《端午节》

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Posted: 2007-06-21 06:28:51 Post subject: 好几年前的《端午节》

端午节 ◆ 祥子一个人走了。留下一个永远的节日五彩的花头绳戴在了孩子的脖子上手腕上脚腕上那青青的艾草也早早地插上了房檐笑声打开了粽子的秘密赛龙舟的呐喊一路奔告着一个节日的到来也许人们已经忘了曾经一个人站在江边沉思之后，纵身跳下

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Posted: 2007-06-21 08:17:32 Post subject:

笑声打开了粽子的秘密好也许人们已经忘了曾经一个人站在江边沉思之后，纵身跳下这个结尾, 还需要修改 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-06-21 17:32:08 Post subject:

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