南村 童生
Joined: 20 Mar 2007 Posts: 20
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Posted: 2007-06-16 01:12:14 Post subject: 发现 |
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风,发现了树
心事都交给绿叶去说
树,发现了风
把天空摇得沙沙作响
我,发现了雨
看一片云无端地流泪
雨,发现了我
从眼里夺眶而出…… |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
半溪明月Collection |
Posted: 2007-06-16 02:29:14 Post subject: |
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不错的小诗~学习! |
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阿依琼裙 秀才

Joined: 09 Apr 2007 Posts: 920 Location: 废墟之上 阿依琼裙Collection |
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韩少君 进士出身

Joined: 06 Apr 2007 Posts: 2558 Location: 吉林四平 韩少君Collection |
Posted: 2007-06-16 14:12:33 Post subject: |
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欣赏!欢迎常来—— _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345 |
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南村 童生
Joined: 20 Mar 2007 Posts: 20
南村Collection |
Posted: 2007-06-16 15:44:13 Post subject: |
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谢谢鼓励 |
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