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Posted: 2007-06-13 05:50:25 Post subject: 心情

心情这杯茶在桌上等我好久了冒着热气我在做着什么没有工夫喝它杯盖结上了水珠象眼睛看着我我终于要喝了它已经凉了我就倒掉了它又倒了一杯热的

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Posted: 2007-06-13 08:24:23 Post subject:

不错我终于要喝了它已经凉了我就倒掉了它又倒了一杯热的这里,是不是可以精炼一下? _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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