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次韵和学宽、闻山君《过洞庭大桥》
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PostPosted: 2007-06-09 17:56:13    Post subject: 次韵和学宽、闻山君《过洞庭大桥》 Reply with quote
次韵和学宽、闻山君《过洞庭大桥》

几篇依韵和同俦，
鄂鄂虹桥看岳州。
前后九龟凭远眺，
纵横八百任遨游。
蒙蒙云雾迷浮黛，
浩浩湖波撩碧绸。
欲问古今忧乐事，
范公题赋在楼头。
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PostPosted: 2007-06-09 18:53:06    Post subject: Reply with quote
有气势。写俺家乡景，不可不提。
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PostPosted: 2007-06-10 02:42:33    Post subject: Reply with quote
大气．流畅。欣赏。
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PostPosted: 2007-06-10 04:46:31    Post subject: Re: 次韵和学宽、闻山君《过洞庭大桥》 Reply with quote
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次韵和学宽、闻山君《过洞庭大桥》

几篇依韵和同俦，
鄂鄂虹桥看岳州。
前后九龟凭远眺，
纵横八百任遨游。
蒙蒙云雾迷浮黛，
浩浩湖波撩碧绸。
欲问古今忧乐事，
范公题赋在楼头。

清景无垠，喜气洋洋！
“蒙蒙云雾迷浮黛”与整体似不够协调。
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PostPosted: 2007-06-10 05:04:59    Post subject: Reply with quote
Laughing 洁淳兄总揽全局，我狗尾续貂。

范公题赋在楼头,
浩渺烟波一望收。
曾是蓬瀛千竹泪,
而今帝世乐悠游。
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PostPosted: 2007-06-12 02:02:07    Post subject: Reply with quote
冰清老师好快的身手：）
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