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城市,弄口晒太阳的老人
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PostPosted: 2007-06-05 06:54:38    Post subject: 城市,弄口晒太阳的老人 Reply with quote

城市,弄口晒太阳的老人



闭目。轻轻呼吸

往事随意

穿梭于呼吸的缝隙



遥远处一丛丛青草

一阵阵呼唤

泥土的腥甜飘荡



鸟鸣从这片树叶跳到另一片

回声清脆叩击缕缕炊烟

隔壁阿三清清嗓子正要出工



蓝蓝的天空让云依恋

映照着篱笆边的春秋

慵懒的小狗趴在睡梦中



又摸到了拨节生长的玉米

她们风里的耳语

如初恋女孩与姐妹从身边经过



闭目。继续轻轻呼吸

用工整的呼吸彻一个堤

暂且挡住来往的噪杂



种几朵白云

撒几两微风

让田野里的小河款款流过



闭目。就这样轻轻呼吸

唯有小孙儿的一声叫喊

才用微笑和满足推开眼帘覆盖往事



你会故作怪嗔

拐杖轻敲水泥地面

少年不懂这个暗示

2007-6-5
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PostPosted: 2007-06-05 07:05:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

种几朵白云

撒几两微风

让田野里的小河款款流过



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PostPosted: 2007-06-05 13:25:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

活灵活现!画成油画或水粉都可。
太平日月,幸福衰老。有点 边城 的味道。

努努力,把弟兄们的诗歌译成英文——
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PostPosted: 2007-06-05 15:53:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错!祝好!
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PostPosted: 2007-06-06 06:28:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

闲散,随意~~收放自如!
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PostPosted: 2007-06-07 07:08:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好各位朋友.谢谢鼓励!
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