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迎春花（五首）

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Posted: 2007-06-05 08:01:17 Post subject: 迎春花（五首）

《迎春花》如果想你思念会更强烈，我站在朝北的阳台上高高的楼房，阻断了视线如果天晴，光线明亮透过楼间缝隙，城外丘陵的轮廓，很清晰现在，不知道那里有没有迎春花嫩黄的，五瓣的花，伸着长长的绿枝条显而易见的感情，没有约束从山坡流下来 2007-4-3 《空白》纸放在桌上一张60K的白纸，很白我没有面对电脑，像往常一样，敲打键盘埋着头，像埋在沙堆里抬不起来这张纸，就这样，一直空白着不着一字。影子移动，天暗得很快要下雨的样子 2007-4-5 《美妙》你的出现掠起一声惊呼，不知道来自什么地方多么美好，瞬间的感觉注定一辈子难忘不仅仅是因为四月的阳光，在这样的早晨充满温暖，铺在心底忘记了时间 2007-4-9 《苔藓》想清晰地看见你岩石耸立，你总在阴暗处，一言不发比我内心更平静，好像守在一尊佛像的身边就守着一生的幸福想贴近你，你湿滑的皮肤摔我一跤，沿着斜坡，有很大的声响路人尖锐的惊呼，佛祖陡然醒来，目光慈祥你就是不肯长到路上 2007-4-6 《像花儿一样》想像那种感觉像一朵花，刹那间盛开就是山野的花也是幸福的，有独立的空间平静地，不受干扰但我不在山涧，听不见流水淙淙城市喧嚣，列车终于带来长长的鸣笛我压抑心底的涌动，昂首向天，一定有月亮满满的，在目光停留的地方几点星星像小黄花 2007-4-9

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Posted: 2007-06-05 08:19:27 Post subject:

显而易见的感情，没有约束从山坡流下来精致的小情绪 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-06-05 13:10:34 Post subject:

我在杂志上读过你的诗，好象是诗歌月刊，忘了。问好！好象是那个闵。是你吗？诗不错。 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-06-05 18:41:36 Post subject:

读了．问好老乡． _________________ 【狂到世人皆欲杀】【醉来天子不能传】

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Posted: 2007-06-05 19:53:05 Post subject:

好,短小精美.

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Posted: 2007-06-07 00:08:16 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

显而易见的感情，没有约束
从山坡流下来

精致的小情绪

谢谢点评！

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Posted: 2007-06-07 00:12:25 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

我在杂志上读过你的诗，好象是诗歌月刊，忘了。问好！好象是那个闵。是你吗？诗不错。

因为闵和闽读音相同，难免出些小误差
问好韩，非常喜欢读你的诗，尤其那些短篇系列的，曾打印了学习！

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Posted: 2007-06-07 00:15:30 Post subject:

李智强 wrote:

读了．问好老乡．

问好福建老乡！

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Posted: 2007-06-07 00:23:51 Post subject:

叶英儿 wrote:

好,短小精美.

英儿，熟悉的名字，问好！

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Posted: 2007-06-07 01:06:06 Post subject:

比我内心更平静，好像守在一尊佛像的身边就守着一生的幸福想贴近你，你湿滑的皮肤摔我一跤，沿着斜坡，有很大的声响路人尖锐的惊呼，佛祖陡然醒来，目光慈祥你就是不肯长到路上 _________________ 溪语的博客:家住鄂西

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Posted: 2007-06-07 02:27:48 Post subject:

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