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鹰

拳上过
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拳上过Collection

Posted: 2007-06-06 02:55:42 Post subject: 鹰

（一）以六月的天为纸腾出大地多出的那个字再以居高临下的态势和我一起去看透生息不灭的人间焰火（二）鹰的翅膀　覆盖着雄性之光是谁　把孤独与泪滴落为阳光和雨水烫伤我整个渝东南山脉（三）鹰呵犹如天地间屏幕上一粒渐行渐远的子弹此刻　我并不知道谁的语言会做一次盘旋

半溪明月
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
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Posted: 2007-06-06 04:18:56 Post subject:

咏物言志,欣赏~ 犹如天地间屏幕上一粒渐行渐远的子弹此刻　我并不知道谁的语言会做一次盘旋

拳上过
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Posted: 2007-06-06 04:40:31 Post subject:

感谢半溪明月君的阅读和品评，向你学习了。

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