孙继廷 秀才
Joined: 21 Apr 2007 Posts: 115 Location: 吉林四平 孙继廷Collection |
Posted: 2007-05-10 04:00:52 Post subject: 致海外诗友 |
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致海外诗友
归雁衔书游子信
客居他乡知几春
杏花已愁随风落
直惹杜鹃啼血痕 |
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kokho 进士出身
Joined: 30 Nov 2006 Posts: 2642 Location: Singapore kokhoCollection |
Posted: 2007-05-10 14:04:45 Post subject: |
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拜读
。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌 |
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晓松 举人
Joined: 26 Feb 2007 Posts: 1192
晓松Collection |
Posted: 2007-05-11 19:25:23 Post subject: Re: 致海外诗友 |
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孙继廷 wrote: |
致海外诗友
归鸿衔书游子信
客居他乡知几春
杏花已愁随风落
直惹杜鹃啼血痕 |
敬和一首,谢诗友:
客舍他乡音不改
流年逝水又一春
夜阑西望人不寐
月上东梢心有痕
[注]:冰清老师有诗句,“逝水无痕心有痕” |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
冰清Collection |
Posted: 2007-05-12 20:34:36 Post subject: |
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敬和一首,谢诗友:
鹓鸀爱栖招凤树,
鲤鱼回喜跳龙门。
是谁飞梦钟祥瑞?
东望长安一故人。 |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
冰清Collection |
Posted: 2007-05-12 20:43:13 Post subject: Re: 致海外诗友 |
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晓松 wrote: |
孙继廷 wrote: |
致海外诗友
归鸿衔书游子信
客居他乡知几春
杏花已愁随风落
直惹杜鹃啼血痕 |
敬和一首,谢诗友:
客舍他乡音不改
流年逝水又一春
夜阑西望人不寐
月上东梢心有痕
[注]:冰清老师有诗句,“流水无痕心有痕” |
谢晓松!
拙句原为:“逝水无痕心有痕” |
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孙继廷 秀才
Joined: 21 Apr 2007 Posts: 115 Location: 吉林四平 孙继廷Collection |
Posted: 2007-05-23 23:18:24 Post subject: |
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再致一首,以慰晓松,冰清二位诗人
杏花执意随风落
空使杜鹃啼血痕
志士四海创大业
天涯何处不逢春 |
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白水 大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-05-24 21:10:40 Post subject: |
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好诗好和, 顶个 |
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大海 童生
Joined: 01 Jun 2007 Posts: 11 Location: 中国吉林四平 大海Collection |
Posted: 2007-06-01 01:47:10 Post subject: Re: 致海外诗友 |
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孙继廷 wrote: |
致海外诗友
归雁衔书游子信
客居他乡知几春
杏花已愁随风落
直惹杜鹃啼血痕 |
继廷兄,我来了
拜读了你的诗 |
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孙继廷 秀才
Joined: 21 Apr 2007 Posts: 115 Location: 吉林四平 孙继廷Collection |
Posted: 2007-06-01 17:34:49 Post subject: |
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致暁松,同沐家乡月.
致冰清,东望长安一故人,故人更在长安东.长安东植梧桐树,梧桐树下待归凤.
谢白水,大海.
问好 |
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