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学拟元曲两个：春游秦岭

huangsi2001
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Posted: 2007-05-29 09:12:18 Post subject: 学拟元曲两个：春游秦岭

学拟元曲两个：春游秦岭【寄生草】：秦镇吃凉皮说甚秦皮白，夸它辣子红，三杯甜酒儿（实）难动！桃花无意馨馨送，柳条有心轻轻弄。醉了俺黄丝把都儿虫，辜负(那）阳春七色谁人用？！【滚绣球】：环山道上岭劈着笔架端，道柳千缕狼毫悬。画出那搭儿万种情丝软，迤逗得蜂也鸟也任盘旋！不由流流连连车速缓，只为怕怕羞羞野兔穿。结队也，汗替默默民工转，却原来这丫别墅满高冠！壑也，你隔三挂五农家乐；沟也，你造坝拦溪好行船。咳！（忍听那）机械车马两喧喧。

白水
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Posted: 2007-05-29 18:38:14 Post subject:

总想秦岭一游, 未能成行. 谢谢你的诗歌让我们得一见

游向高原的鱼
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Joined: 20 May 2007
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Posted: 2007-05-29 18:52:13 Post subject:

有曲的味道。我喜欢读，写不来。羡慕！

晓松
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Posted: 2007-05-30 20:33:34 Post subject:

现在见到曲的作品不多，这两首曲写得有滋有味。顶一个！

暗香如沁
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Posted: 2007-05-31 02:11:46 Post subject:

也提．果然写出了曲的味道． _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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