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《午夜盛开的玫瑰》
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PostPosted: 2007-05-30 03:16:51    Post subject: 《午夜盛开的玫瑰》 Reply with quote

《午夜盛开的玫瑰》
           
 二00五年八月十一日 夜

墓前献上最后一束花
凄然泪下的时候也是伤心欲绝的时刻 哭泣
在空旷的墓地久久回荡着

让 风吹去你眼中的泪花
因为,我不在忧伤

午夜盛开的玫瑰
不在寂寞等待
开放的玫瑰花在夜色街头

午夜盛开的玫瑰
午夜盛开的玫瑰

午夜的街头 玫瑰却依然寂寞的开放
遗失在哪儿的回忆 在淡淡的花香里忧郁地回望

午夜寂寞开放的玫瑰花
端起美丽的酒杯 让咖啡的味道 溢出
是心醉 还是 心碎

透着玫瑰花香的夜里
我不在悲伤

因为,在此时更需要坚强
我不再流泪
因为,玫瑰花的芳香
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2007-05-30 04:57:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

午夜寂寞开放的玫瑰花
端起美丽的酒杯 让咖啡的味道 溢出
是心醉 还是 心碎...........情感的.
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PostPosted: 2007-05-31 19:06:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

还要简洁些。
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PostPosted: 2007-06-01 13:40:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

莫伤心,莫伤心。烟波渺渺望古今,哪有不离人。
千里云,万里云,只恨难接两地心,共寄月一轮。

问候渭城侯!陕西人吗?
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PostPosted: 2007-06-26 10:33:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

赵福治 wrote:
午夜寂寞开放的玫瑰花
端起美丽的酒杯 让咖啡的味道 溢出
是心醉 还是 心碎...........情感的.



呵呵.情感渲泻.一发不可收拾.
见笑了.
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PostPosted: 2007-06-26 10:53:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

沙漠 wrote:
还要简洁些。



写成歌词了.呵呵.少了意象.
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PostPosted: 2007-06-26 10:56:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

韩少君 wrote:
莫伤心,莫伤心。烟波渺渺望古今,哪有不离人。
千里云,万里云,只恨难接两地心,共寄月一轮。

问候渭城侯!陕西人吗?



呵呵.本名:侯维成.山西人氏.现居云南省.


Smile

多谢"共寄月一轮!"
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