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菜园地

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Posted: 2007-06-17 22:24:15 Post subject: 菜园地

菜园地田斌屋后的菜园地被回字型围墙框牢夏日的暮色里桃树梨树散发出果香成熟的气息晚风中我在菜园地悠闲地踱着方步不料被醉人的果香来了个拥身的热吻轻柔的月光静静地泻在一片片叶子和花上红的椒紫的茄缤纷了朦胧的夜色忍不住我用目光将它们一一采摘一股温馨的暖流乘机将我灌得心醉突然间一只飞萤眼前滑过疑是星星坠落菜地抬望眼满天星星沐浴夜色水声响起像是隔壁洗澡的妹妹勾起了我不尽的遐思不一会无数的蝈蝈和蛐蛐相继登台高一声低一曲弹起了抒怀的琴声拉呀拉硬把我拉回了梦想的童年邮编：242000 通联：皖宣城市宣州开元小区区文化馆电话：（0563）2025012 E-mail: xctianbin@163.com

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Posted: 2007-06-18 04:48:15 Post subject:

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