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望着你缺席的空间
ahchaos
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PostPosted: 2006-06-26 03:14:39    Post subject: 望着你缺席的空间 Reply with quote

望着你缺席的空间


匆匆地步入
自己的领地

对面的桌
空空地
陪着
秒针滴答地溜过

沉默
在你缺席的空间
弥漫

我心如巢
那只小鸟飞走后
不能盛满的世界
在细雨和秋风中
晃着

忽上
忽下
像一匹不安的小马驹
挣扎着那绳
面对
前面那块空旷而淡青色的原野

但是你
依然暗藏在秋色的衣襟里
灼目的呼吸
和可爱的目光
埋藏在记忆的深谷

我想着

匆匆穿行在这几十千米的
空间
风雨兼程
风风雨雨
洗得你铮亮铮亮
如一把刚刚出卖的匕首
脱去了尘埃
与世俗的喧嚣
独自呈现的目前

目前
望着对面你缺席后的空间
钟声低低地诉说寥落
我心如巢
在那只小鸟飞走后
与稚嫩的枝柯
在风雨中摇着
摇着
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张少林
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Joined: 21 Jun 2006
Posts: 89

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PostPosted: 2006-06-26 03:50:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

遥望与畅想溢出诗行。学习,问好。
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乐园成也
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Joined: 27 May 2006
Posts: 228

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PostPosted: 2006-06-26 04:18:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

情感执着:))提一下!
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尹士林
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Joined: 26 May 2006
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Location: 河北保定易县中学
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PostPosted: 2006-06-26 16:23:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

沉默
在你缺席的空间
弥漫

我心如巢
那只小鸟飞走后
不能盛满的世界
在细雨和秋风中
晃着
_________________
忧郁过、犹豫过,从未放弃过!!!!!
河北易县中学 尹士林
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张少林
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Posts: 89

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PostPosted: 2006-06-28 18:44:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

请投http://xz.netsh.com/bbs/798581/

深表谢意。
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