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你曾经像我一样绝望
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PostPosted: 2007-05-29 18:58:18    Post subject: 你曾经像我一样绝望 Reply with quote

    你曾经像我一样绝望

天大的玻璃背后有着一双忧郁的眼
眼里有着无数少年心中沸腾的火焰
你曾经像我一样绝望
最后的欢笑之瓶飞身坠入深渊 遥不可见

冰冷的湖顶 爱情如闪电 猛然乍现
一片浩瀚的窃喜瞬间焚过金色麦田
是谁把璀璨如精美夜空般的幻想藏在心间
又是谁把它们恶狠狠地 一一撕成碎片

陡峭的山坡锐长出盘子大的花朵 傲贵的红颜
它们在一场细雨后勇敢 它们在一场风暴后腐烂
双手倒种入潮湿的土壤 坚硬的十指开始疯狂
澎湃的呻吟让硕大的潮汐 久久怀念

冷落的巨门顶天立地 直击面前
野腥的狼牙反复咀嚼 冰块 石头 仙人球 麻绳以及绸缎
寂寞像最蓝最蓝的叶子那样彻底通透的孤独
一支新铅笔被当众用力地折断

青铜的城头上数不尽的九头兽 身披白云的棉被 尽情撒欢
深海底开发出成群的红绿游乐园
双耳织满秋天的晨露 双眼扎满北方的铁轨
幸福是属于他们的永不熄灭的闪闪光环

纷乱的森林堂皇地拔地而起 一条小路惊慌蔓延
尘土飞扬 早已奔远 五彩裙带 眩目骄艳
捡垃圾吞大麻的儿童们成吨地似空空如也的易拉罐般迅速覆盖遍地的城市与村庄
哎呀! 真正的灾难!

总会有那么一个时刻 在那么一个角落 饱含了绝对的黑暗
所有的喧嚣都被清新的安静 最最温柔地霸占
你曾经像我一样绝望
望着雪白雪白的 遮天连地的墙 默默地无言
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PostPosted: 2007-05-29 19:06:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

青铜的城头上数不尽的九头兽 身披白云的棉被 尽情撒欢

望着雪白雪白的 遮天连地的墙 默默地无言

心绪表现得很活脱
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PostPosted: 2007-05-31 01:21:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

提!!!!!读!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1


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下一个偶像是野兽
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PostPosted: 2007-05-31 07:29:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

总会有那么一个时刻 在那么一个角落 饱含了绝对的黑暗
所有的喧嚣都被清新的安静 最最温柔地霸占
你曾经像我一样绝望
望着雪白雪白的 遮天连地的墙 默默地无言
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PostPosted: 2007-05-31 17:58:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

不知不觉读完。好如十四行诗一般的流畅美丽。
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