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我的名字叫阿秀（五首）

闽北阿秀
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Posted: 2007-05-28 03:27:38 Post subject: 我的名字叫阿秀（五首）

《名字》要告诉每一个人我叫阿秀，阿是前缀，却不可忽略不计，开口呼响亮秀是关键字，有实在意义，诵读时，不能不注意语气而且，还要提醒你们这两个字适合一遍又一遍，反复默念慢节奏，读出长长的尾音更有意味 2007-3-28 《背影》只是短短的瞬间早晨，在人来人往的街道熟悉的背影，甩手，走姿，无不是你的样子甚至，我敢肯定，就是你直至淹没，在远处消失，我没有开口阳光拖出长长的影子，我有短暂的落寞在转身的那一刻，感到很奇怪我为什么不忧伤 2007-3-30 《足够》紧握你的手异样的感觉，在春天开始的时候跟火无关，跟红盖头无关湿漉漉的物质，达到足够燃烧的温度透彻肌肤，感受热，超过温暖，不是蓝，肯定是红呼吸足够急促，力量足够大有深深的烙印 2007-3-31 《流逝》我默念《国风?周南》桃之夭夭，灼灼其华就有粉红一片，花瓣如柳絮般，漫天飘飞城市的楼房和四周的山一样高我居于其中，被淹没桃花离我很遥远，还隔着层层雨帘想到那年，和她一起去水渠边看桃花感叹落花流水已经是很久的事情 2007-3-27 《私语》长时间说话确实累了，换一个位置不断调整，放松，找到一种舒服的坐姿抚摸你长长的秀发像鸟儿梳理被风吹乱的羽毛窗外，刚刚露出娇黄嫩芽的柳枝，在春风里窃窃私语 2007-3-28

沙漠
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Posted: 2007-05-28 03:51:26 Post subject:

淡淡的味，却也悠长：） _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

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Posted: 2007-05-28 08:52:02 Post subject:

清新秀丽阿秀的名字就是好我是浙西南, 与闽北接壤 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

闽北阿秀
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Posted: 2007-05-30 08:30:14 Post subject:

沙漠 wrote:

淡淡的味，却也悠长：）

这样的效果自我感觉还行，哈哈

闽北阿秀
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Posted: 2007-05-30 08:31:00 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

清新秀丽

阿秀的名字就是好

我是浙西南, 与闽北接壤
Laughing

那是亲爱的邻居了，问好！

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-05-30 08:46:38 Post subject:

闽北阿秀 wrote:

hepingdao wrote:

清新秀丽

阿秀的名字就是好

我是浙西南, 与闽北接壤
Laughing

那是亲爱的邻居了，问好！

你说说看是什么县市的?
Very Happy

溪语
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Posted: 2007-05-30 15:11:48 Post subject:

城市的楼房和四周的山一样高我居于其中，被淹没桃花离我很遥远，还隔着层层雨帘想到那年，和她一起去水渠边看桃花感叹落花流水已经是很久的事情 _________________ 溪语的博客:家住鄂西

山城子
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Posted: 2007-05-30 16:59:46 Post subject:

要告诉每一个人我叫阿秀，阿是前缀，却不可忽略不计，开口呼响亮秀是关键字，有实在意义，诵读时，不能不注意语气而且，还要提醒你们这两个字适合一遍又一遍，反复默念慢节奏，读出长长的尾音更有意味 ——今生若得见面时，我会喊了！阿-秀——！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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