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这个夜还没有被风催开
谷风
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PostPosted: 2007-05-29 17:12:59    Post subject: 这个夜还没有被风催开 Reply with quote

[这个夜还没有被风催开]

这个夜还没有被风催开
结实的像花蕾
被街灯映得羞
它就在一窗之外 依在树上
梦般的神情 让我触摸

让我轻轻触摸
风一片片揭开瓦片上的星光
风一片片揭开迟来的月光
风一片片揭开沉静下来的声音
像花蕾悄悄绽放
此时 我看见花瓣的生动
展开一扇扇窗和许多人另一种心扉


[大水]

这是谁的身影 被大鸟煽动
这又是谁路过时丢下的衣襟
那么些擦不掉的印记
被风印染

大水
我看见石头的记忆被拍打
阳光与雨水的脚步被涤洗
船像另一种刀子 切割浪尖
浪尖上的声音复杂
又一下子全部涌入我内心


[一粒尘埃]

小小的尘埃
你的自由也经过闪电 大风
你沉下来聚起喊声
或落在草尖上 瓦片 或一个窗台
或者某一天 我行走之时
你占有我的瞳孔 我的瞳孔疼痛

小小的尘埃
万万年前就存在
万万年前你就打磨这个世界
你身上收敛了多少痛苦的影子
其实 你多么沉重 又多么悲哀

[大雨之前]

雨点打在叶子上
雨点打在墙上
雨点打在路上
我被打在雨点里 翻找自己

一只鸟还在叫 羽毛就要湿了
鸟要抓住一场雨
鸟与我一直没有走出去

[树上的鸟群]

一只鸟跳来跳去
一只鸟凝望
一只鸟不住地鸣叫
一只鸟张开翅膀飞起落下又飞起

这群鸟做着各种动作 在晨光里
我看见它们时也是其中的一只
不过 我是在另一棵树上

[此时]

笛声串起夜
我不清楚
笛声又串起我 笛声弯了

月光折叠起远星
我不清楚
月光折叠起我 月光疼了

此时 爱人看见了我
爱人遮住了我的影子


[读] 

我读着风中的树木 大水以及远处的光亮
我读着我
 
我读着土地上的影子
被深夜星星照亮 又落定尘埃

我读着路上发生的一切
被一扇扇窗见证
好久了 我深入窗内
总想解开一些秘密
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天淡云闲
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PostPosted: 2007-05-29 18:45:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好谷风,先出去一会,晚上回来欣赏
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沙漠
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Joined: 26 Jan 2007
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Location: 中国温州
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PostPosted: 2007-05-29 19:09:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢这些简短而意味深长的诗!
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2007-05-29 20:47:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

谷风老师,你的诗书已经收到了,内容精致书面精美,很喜欢~钱我让漂之鱼兄转交给你,谢谢你的好诗! Very Happy
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子花
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PostPosted: 2007-05-29 22:44:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

半溪明月 wrote:
谷风老师,你的诗书已经收到了,内容精致书面精美,很喜欢~钱我让漂之鱼兄转交给你,谢谢你的好诗! Very Happy

古风大哥我也想要本!一直喜欢你的诗歌.
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谷风
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PostPosted: 2007-05-30 04:58:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

子花 wrote:
半溪明月 wrote:
谷风老师,你的诗书已经收到了,内容精致书面精美,很喜欢~钱我让漂之鱼兄转交给你,谢谢你的好诗! Very Happy

古风大哥我也想要本!一直喜欢你的诗歌.


谢谢二位 !子花给我你的地址 我好邮寄 短信给我也可
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下一个偶像是野兽
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PostPosted: 2007-05-31 07:34:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

文好。读来心动
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2007-05-31 14:24:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

拜读。 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-05-31 16:04:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

精短而蕴含丰富!问好!!
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金金
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PostPosted: 2007-06-01 20:51:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错,提读
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漂之雨
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PostPosted: 2007-06-02 13:07:21    Post subject: 再欣赏! Reply with quote

问好!
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