上城
进士出身
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Posts: 2024
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 Posted: 2008-02-28 19:57:53 Post subject: 今夜满天星斗 |
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今夜满天星斗
惊现于这一刻：
抬头仰望
满天星斗
夜，缓缓沉下去
沉下去
月亮裸卧山头
隐隐无边的虫鸣
还给天空以眼睛
团团簇簇
星星点点
那一柄杓子
可是七星北斗？
2007夏于家中
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nobody
进士出身
Joined: 31 Dec 2006
Posts: 2651
Location: Madtown
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| Posted: 2008-02-29 15:00:25 Post subject: |
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月亮裸卧山头
隐隐无边的虫鸣
还给天空以眼睛
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阿依琼裙
秀才
Joined: 09 Apr 2007
Posts: 920
Location: 废墟之上
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歪歪1981
童生
Joined: 17 Jan 2008
Posts: 28
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| Posted: 2008-03-02 18:39:41 Post subject: |
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韩少君
进士出身
Joined: 06 Apr 2007
Posts: 2558
Location: 吉林四平
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| Posted: 2008-03-02 19:10:08 Post subject: |
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久违了!问好!
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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| 感觉诗歌的风格变得柔美了 |
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