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星星，上午或其他（组诗）

赵福治
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Posted: 2007-05-28 04:34:57 Post subject: 星星，上午或其他（组诗）

星星，上午或其他（组诗）《那夜的星星》星星都困了。我把水沸腾放在左手，把古词放在宋代女子的鼻尖，等待典雅词汇的婆娑。等待右手的花。徐徐开放是。这是星星的夜晚月，亮不能成为理由，酝酿风起，和雨到来之前的湿润低吟。吟一首唐朝的诗右手的花。始终没有举起《上午，看不到的风》分明有风吹皱上午，吹过脸庞和一池绿水。空空的心背影，装不下阳光哭……有时，不需要理由平静的水边，我一再掩饰哭的姿势，掩饰泪珠和手臂上的印痕。纷乱的音韵四起。不可挽回《风上的思考》风已经不是风了。我知道是温度，烧灼了思维水岸，和不适宜的表达我需要一个洞,装进鲁莽，夜色下的动作忏悔，和那晚的月光。留下星星摘一瓣宋词。凋落伤感

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-05-28 06:11:53 Post subject:

很精致的小诗握手！ _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

白水
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Posted: 2007-05-28 07:04:13 Post subject:

灵动, 凄美.

阿依琼裙
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Posted: 2007-05-28 08:41:55 Post subject:

风已经不是风了。我知道是温度，烧灼了思维水岸，和不适宜的表达欣赏! _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

赵福治
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Posted: 2007-05-28 22:31:49 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

很精致的小诗
握手！

兄多批.

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Posted: 2008-06-16 07:29:22 Post subject:

特喜欢第二首诗,韵律很美... 谢谢分享! _________________ 天边云一朵苍海粟一粒云儿朵朵随风飘粟儿粒粒满山崖

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Posted: 2008-06-16 15:08:51 Post subject:

沉稳内敛.学习. _________________ 秀水：省青协会员.在《星星诗刊》《绿风》《诗选刊》《常青藤诗刊》等发表诗歌散文二百余篇。兼写童话。邮箱xshx100@163.com 秀水博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/feizoudeshui

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Posted: 2008-06-26 20:02:38 Post subject:

哭……有时，不需要理平静的水边，我一再掩饰h D 哭的姿势，掩饰泪珠 l 上和手臂上的印痕。纷乱的音韵北美枫c 四起。不可挽回 ————————————————————————一种冷的美言，欣赏！ _________________ 诗歌、诗剧。以文会友。http://blog.sina.com.cn/juneraiyue112

柯寅
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Posted: 2008-06-27 02:55:00 Post subject: 确实很精致，欣赏！

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Posted: 2008-07-12 01:05:02 Post subject:

我读到的是忧国忧民的情愫。远握，问好。谢谢对我的东东的意见。此稿因为时间的关系，改得还是不能尽如人意，多提意见。

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Posted: 2008-07-12 17:17:32 Post subject:

wq0066 wrote:

特喜欢第二首诗,韵律很美...

谢谢分享!

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Posted: 2008-07-30 16:37:02 Post subject:

那夜的星星也真是浩瀚、、、学习、问好。

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