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《钢厂,一个写钢号的人》
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PostPosted: 2006-06-24 06:39:52    Post subject: 《钢厂,一个写钢号的人》 Reply with quote

《钢厂,一个写钢号的人》

  
  陈晓林[重庆]


在钢厂
每天都能看见一个写钢号的人
他在书写钢铁
许多年来
沿着蓝天深深的走廊
就这样把自己也写进去了
手中流露出的数据与符号
煽动了
春天的想法

他常常自言自语的与钢铁说话
说自己是一个放牧的人
虽然这辈子远离了草原
忍不住也哼一句:马儿呀
你慢些走呀,慢些走
曾经顽皮好动的钢铁
曾经粗野豪放的钢铁
这会儿正安静的坐在门坎上
特别听话
等待高速公路、桥梁、摩天大厦
接他们回家

一个写钢号的人
的确也有一些想法
想妻子温柔如水坐在床沿
碧波荡漾
奏一曲:美丽的草原我的家
想幸福和欢乐撞痛了腰
想儿子也能象一块好钢
长出坚硬的脊梁和翅膀
他默默地书写着钢铁
也书写着被钢铁
冶炼出来的
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PostPosted: 2006-06-24 07:09:48    Post subject: 问好! Reply with quote

他默默地书写着钢铁
也书写着被钢铁
冶炼出来的


——写得好!
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致梵高(原创) 我用原始人的石器 砸断自己的血管 把我浓黑的血 染成黄色 让你去涂抹 星空和麦田 我将你的生命 逆转 让你死亡 一千年
而后 只活一天
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PostPosted: 2006-06-24 08:39:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

赞美劳动,歌颂生活。学习,问好。
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PostPosted: 2006-06-24 14:40:16    Post subject: 劳动者之歌! Reply with quote

赞美的歌!问好!
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PostPosted: 2006-06-24 14:41:09    Post subject: 晓林可是 Reply with quote

乐园?
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PostPosted: 2006-06-24 17:57:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

来自生活的赞歌!问好!
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PostPosted: 2006-06-24 21:18:27    Post subject: Re: 问好! Reply with quote

魏晋风度 wrote:
他默默地书写着钢铁
也书写着被钢铁
冶炼出来的


——写得好!

谢谢阅读:))问好
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PostPosted: 2006-06-24 21:19:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

张少林 wrote:
赞美劳动,歌颂生活。学习,问好。

握手问好:))
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PostPosted: 2006-06-24 21:20:29    Post subject: Re: 劳动者之歌! Reply with quote

剑熔 wrote:
赞美的歌!问好!

谢谢:))问好
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PostPosted: 2006-06-24 21:23:47    Post subject: Re: 晓林可是 Reply with quote

剑熔 wrote:
乐园?


呵呵:))是的!
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PostPosted: 2006-06-24 21:24:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

鲁绪刚 wrote:
来自生活的赞歌!问好!

谢谢:))
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PostPosted: 2006-06-26 05:30:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢各位:))
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PostPosted: 2006-06-26 16:20:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

生活 工作
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忧郁过、犹豫过,从未放弃过!!!!!
河北易县中学 尹士林
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PostPosted: 2006-06-27 06:05:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好:))
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