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花开二朵
含昕
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PostPosted: 2007-05-24 08:43:32    Post subject: 花开二朵 Reply with quote

<花开二朵>

春天一定被你藏起来了
我喊很久也不见回答
倒是雨
急急忙忙赶来
为我撑起一朵朵蘑菇

我想就这样忽略了
反正尝了蘑菇的鲜味
它刺激着我的味蕾 让我想奔跑
就在外面的山坡上

然而你张开耳朵
仿佛要听许多的叹息或者赞美
才肯下垂
楼房在你的高度之下
拘束不安
它捡起黎明
想举手奉上

哦,我不能依
我才是等了一冬的人
我挂着雪花
体内传来冰块绵绵破裂的声音
站了那么久
我需要春天 或者
黎明
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hepingdao
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PostPosted: 2007-05-24 10:36:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

站了那么久
我需要春天
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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-05-24 10:59:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

清新的小诗
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金金
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PostPosted: 2007-05-26 00:30:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

你这个需要简练,简练了就是很好的!!真不错:)`
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