草原牧歌
童生
Joined: 21 May 2007
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 Posted: 2007-05-21 05:29:35 Post subject: 复明 |
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复明
睁开眼睛
是一整个春天
春天的天，天蓝
天蓝的海
在凝眸深处
从此，从一个春天
走向落叶飘零的季节
走向花开的日子
草长，莺飞 |
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陈若祥
秀才
Joined: 12 Feb 2007
Posts: 470
Location: 中国*安徽
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| Posted: 2007-05-21 07:06:39 Post subject: |
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风格清新自然，流畅轻快．
顶真和用典的手法，羚羊挂角，无迹可求． |
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龙飞
童生
Joined: 13 May 2007
Posts: 40
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| Posted: 2007-05-21 07:48:04 Post subject: |
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＂天蓝的海
在凝眸深处 ＂
极大之于极小，不错．
象中寓着情． |
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志超
童生
Joined: 09 May 2007
Posts: 7
Location: 中国北京
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| Posted: 2007-05-21 08:32:35 Post subject: |
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由眼 到天 再到海 又回到了双眸
钦佩作者的链接思想！
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让它在土下静静沉睡
在对的时间对的地方萌发成长
直到生命的终结 |
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韩少君
进士出身
Joined: 06 Apr 2007
Posts: 2558
Location: 吉林四平
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| Posted: 2007-05-21 15:20:19 Post subject: |
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轻盈！欢迎。
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靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345 |
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草原牧歌
童生
Joined: 21 May 2007
Posts: 23
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| Posted: 2007-05-22 00:43:53 Post subject: |
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感谢朋友们对本人的鼓励!
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changan
童生
Joined: 06 May 2007
Posts: 39
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| Posted: 2007-05-24 02:38:44 Post subject: |
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＂天蓝的海
在凝眸深处 ＂
极大之于极小，不错．
象中寓着情． |
极是！想像得不错！
你的照片好有个性哎！
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在生活中寻找诗歌，在诗歌中寻找生活。创作生活的诗歌，创造诗样的生活。 |
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