雨木
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Joined: 22 Mar 2007
Posts: 30
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 Posted: 2007-05-20 08:57:20 Post subject: 夜雨白洋淀 |
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夜雨白洋淀
淡然的雨 搭着风的双肩
吻过夏荷 匆游白洋淀
她带着星星的真情
揣着月亮的祝愿
横穿苇巷 下了小桥
直奔孙犁纪念馆窗前
十年梦想 就为这天
给老人家献首打击乐
巧送寂寞夜晚 |
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赵福治
探花
Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
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| Posted: 2007-05-20 09:17:51 Post subject: |
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揣着月亮的祝愿
横穿苇巷 下了小桥...................感觉婉转些效果更好. |
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kokho
进士出身
Joined: 30 Nov 2006
Posts: 2642
Location: Singapore
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| Posted: 2007-05-20 09:51:48 Post subject: |
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吻过夏荷 匆游白洋淀
她带着星星的真情
揣着月亮的祝愿
横穿苇巷 下了小桥
。。。拜读 问好！
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乒乓、摄影、诗歌 |
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韩少君
进士出身
Joined: 06 Apr 2007
Posts: 2558
Location: 吉林四平
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| Posted: 2007-05-20 13:59:38 Post subject: |
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雨打涟漪丁冬响——
问好！
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雨木
童生
Joined: 22 Mar 2007
Posts: 30
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| Posted: 2007-05-28 00:24:39 Post subject: 谢谢少君 kokho 福治的鼓励和指点。问好并握。 |
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