半溪明月
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药丸
文/半溪明月
天闷热
昨夜贪吃的苹果
发生吐泻
药丸在抽屉里放着
求你别来打听
我羞于说出处方的秘笈
流水、沙滩、失控的灯火
城市、女人、激情的蹈光
阳光下 晾晒
风吹的日子
绳线放得太长，纸鸢摇曳
逐渐远去
脚下的路清晰，泛着微光
雷声嘶哑
梅雨季节快来了吗？
阴天里我继续收藏药丸
不去服用 只用来回味
疼就疼吧
疼着 清醒
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hepingdao
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| Posted: 2007-05-19 06:16:24 Post subject: |
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不错
但这是另一种风花雪月：药丸来药丸去
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俞伟远
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| Posted: 2007-05-19 07:27:06 Post subject: |
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疼就疼吧
疼着 清醒
细微处见诗意
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他乡客
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| Posted: 2007-05-19 11:35:18 Post subject: |
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| 诗的后面似乎有一段浪漫曲折的故事. Say-Say ba. |
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韩少君
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| Posted: 2007-05-19 14:06:31 Post subject: |
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隐秘之痛。痛里美丽！
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| Posted: 2007-05-20 03:29:00 Post subject: |
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半溪明月遇见高人了？顿悟了？ 最近以来，写的有质有量。基本每一首都有可取之处。几个月前好像还没入门的感觉（也许是我看错了），现在显然已经在门里了，离门口还挺远的，哈哈。恭喜。
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白水
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| Posted: 2007-05-20 05:03:54 Post subject: |
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问好明月, 春天来了, 你的诗歌也写的越来越好. 精一个.加油噢  |
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半溪明月
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| Posted: 2007-05-20 05:57:05 Post subject: |
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| hepingdao wrote: |
不错
但这是另一种风花雪月：药丸来药丸去
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问好岛主,风花雪月的东西不见得都是甜的,呵呵,药丸放久也会过期~
谢谢岛主鼓励. |
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徐业华
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| Posted: 2007-05-20 06:00:49 Post subject: |
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隐忍之美，学习精华。
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半溪明月
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| Posted: 2007-05-20 06:07:32 Post subject: |
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| 俞伟远 wrote: |
疼就疼吧
疼着 清醒
细微处见诗意 |
谢朋友赏评~问好! |
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半溪明月
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| Posted: 2007-05-20 06:26:01 Post subject: |
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| 他乡客 wrote: |
| 诗的后面似乎有一段浪漫曲折的故事. Say-Say ba. |
呵呵,悄悄给你说说~ |
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半溪明月
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| Posted: 2007-05-20 06:54:24 Post subject: |
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谢阿依琼裙喜欢,呵呵,发觉只叫你半个名字比较吃亏~ |
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半溪明月
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| Posted: 2007-05-20 07:20:04 Post subject: |
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谢谢少君,麻木了~ |
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阿依琼裙
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半溪明月
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| Posted: 2007-05-20 07:25:43 Post subject: |
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| nobody wrote: |
| 半溪明月遇见高人了？顿悟了？ 最近以来，写的有质有量。基本每一首都有可取之处。几个月前好像还没入门的感觉（也许是我看错了），现在显然已经在门里了，离门口还挺远的，哈哈。恭喜。 |
呵呵,等你这个高人指点等不着啊.呵呵，老师很多，大家都是我的老师~可能有点点开悟了，不过也才找到门口的通道,离进门不远,问好,最近还很忙吗? |
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半溪明月
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| Posted: 2007-05-20 07:35:52 Post subject: |
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| 白水 Moonlight wrote: |
| 问好明月, 春天来了, 你的诗歌也写的越来越好. 精一个.加油噢 |
谢月光妹妹的鼓励支持,离精华还有距离~ |
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溪语
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| Posted: 2007-05-20 07:37:05 Post subject: |
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疼就疼吧
疼着 清醒
------一种无奈,一份顿悟!
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半溪明月
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问好绿风的朋友~ |
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