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(原创)破碎的文字
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PostPosted: 2006-06-18 21:36:00    Post subject: (原创)破碎的文字 Reply with quote

虽非穷极却也无聊的时候,也想表达一下。于是选择最短的来处理这种表达。短为四句,但并非要学唐之绝句。只是短而已。

假如空气已经死亡

为什么天上飘着云朵

假如空气依然活着

为什么地上躺满尘埃

这尘埃刚躺下,就走来一位先生。看完之后,发出强烈之责问:你老是问我们“为什么”,我们问谁去?这个问题应该你回答,回答不了,这首诗就是失败。

他的豪言让我既自卑又感激。感激者,盖我向来没想过,文字写得短,就可以称为诗---既如此,我以后还可多涂抹。自卑者,我可是从来就顽固地认为文章是“评”天下的,并非“平”天下的。然这先生现在却命我前往“平”天下,我除了知道地上有尘埃,别的一概不知。这真是逼我往女人那里跳(不想跳火坑),我想女人固然对男人颇有高标准,也不至于令我去学秦始皇。
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致梵高(原创) 我用原始人的石器 砸断自己的血管 把我浓黑的血 染成黄色 让你去涂抹 星空和麦田 我将你的生命 逆转 让你死亡 一千年
而后 只活一天
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PostPosted: 2006-06-26 06:28:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

提读:))问好!
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PostPosted: 2006-06-26 07:08:10    Post subject: 谢谢 Reply with quote

乐园成也 wrote:
提读:))问好!


问好!
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致梵高(原创) 我用原始人的石器 砸断自己的血管 把我浓黑的血 染成黄色 让你去涂抹 星空和麦田 我将你的生命 逆转 让你死亡 一千年
而后 只活一天
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