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村庄

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Posted: 2007-05-06 09:04:42 Post subject: 村庄

我的村庄和阿猫阿狗的村庄没有什么两样村口的碓窝子里有风有雨没有谁来收获人们已经习惯于电动工具积蓄多年的石板盖不住童年的阳光一只蚯蚓从底层探出头也顶着一片自己的天空青梅和竹马是一种古朴的传统爱情正向山外蔓延

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Posted: 2007-05-06 09:46:22 Post subject:

一只蚯蚓从底层探出头也顶着一片自己的天空 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-05-06 13:56:37 Post subject:

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 我的村庄和阿猫阿狗的村庄没有什么两样 -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 我的村庄和阿猫阿狗的村庄没有什么两样青梅和竹马是一种古朴的传统爱情正向山外蔓延好句子好感觉。诗意的。兑窝子----我们东北人不懂，见笑了。 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-05-06 17:15:07 Post subject:

青梅和竹马是一种古朴的传统爱情正向山外蔓延

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Posted: 2007-05-07 03:19:54 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

一只蚯蚓从底层探出头
也顶着一片自己的天空

问候岛主!!

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Posted: 2007-05-07 03:25:20 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

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我的村庄
和阿猫阿狗的村庄
没有什么两样

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我的村庄
和阿猫阿狗的村庄
没有什么两样

青梅和竹马是一种古朴的传统
爱情正向山外蔓延
好句子好感觉。诗意的。兑窝子----我们东北人不懂，见笑了。

其实兑窝子就是"给稻谷剥去衣裳 "的工具.用一种击打的方式让稻谷裸露出它的身子.

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Posted: 2007-05-08 06:39:55 Post subject:

yanxiao81 wrote:

青梅和竹马是一种古朴的传统
爱情正向山外蔓延

问候朋友!!

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Posted: 2007-05-12 07:49:31 Post subject:

母亲节----问候天下所有的母亲!! _________________ 溪语的博客:家住鄂西

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Posted: 2007-05-12 18:41:32 Post subject:

又读一遍青梅和竹马是一种古朴的传统爱情正向山外蔓延村庄守不住爱情了？其实兑窝子就是"给稻谷剥去衣裳 "的工具.用一种击打的方式让稻谷裸露出它的身子. _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-05-13 03:45:54 Post subject:

村口的兑窝子里有风有雨没有谁来收获感觉很好~学习，问候!

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Posted: 2007-05-14 06:33:41 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

又读一遍
青梅和竹马是一种古朴的传统
爱情正向山外蔓延

村庄守不住爱情了？

其实兑窝子就是"给稻谷剥去衣裳 "的工具.用一种击打的方式让稻谷裸露出它的身子.

不是守不住爱情,是守不住古老的爱情!问好韩兄!!

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Posted: 2007-05-14 21:07:33 Post subject:

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村口的兑窝子里有风有雨
没有谁来收获

感觉很好~学习，问候! Very Happy

谢明月,问好!

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Posted: 2007-05-15 00:11:51 Post subject:

青梅和竹马是一种古朴的传统爱情正向山外蔓延学习! _________________ 孤独的执烛者，在黑暗的水面上留下火苗的伤口～～～～～

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Posted: 2007-05-15 06:48:41 Post subject:

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青梅和竹马是一种古朴的传统
爱情正向山外蔓延

学习!

问候品玉!!

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Posted: 2007-05-15 13:59:00 Post subject:

村口的兑窝子里有风有雨没有谁来收获 _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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Posted: 2007-05-20 07:20:08 Post subject:

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村口的兑窝子里有风有雨
没有谁来收获

问候阿依!!

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Posted: 2007-05-20 07:46:07 Post subject:

改了下! _________________ 溪语的博客:家住鄂西

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