黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2007-05-09 12:08:21 Post subject: 再致白水兄 |
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七绝 再致白水兄
有人呼姐我称兄,
敬义崇文情理中,
似水柔情诗律细,
和诗待赏趁春风. |
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hepingdao Site Admin

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 8106
hepingdaoCollection |
Posted: 2007-05-09 12:22:14 Post subject: |
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白水兄好
黄洋界同好
 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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晓松 举人

Joined: 26 Feb 2007 Posts: 1192
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Posted: 2007-05-09 16:32:22 Post subject: |
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看来白水的诗是非和不可了。
和诗待赏趁春风。问好! |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-05-09 19:38:08 Post subject: |
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看来这债再不还就要炮声隆了 临屏草和一首, 见笑:
黄洋界上和诗兄
水淡情浓笔墨中
忍看槡园清乐尽
低吟半阙付东风
PEACE, 晓松两位大斑斑看可"绝"不可  |
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晓松 举人

Joined: 26 Feb 2007 Posts: 1192
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Posted: 2007-05-09 20:33:29 Post subject: |
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想当年,黄洋界上炮声响,敌人吓得连夜跑。
一首好诗,一首好和,鼓掌! |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-05-09 20:51:13 Post subject: |
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晓松 wrote: |
想当年,黄洋界上炮声响,敌人吓得连夜跑。
一首好诗,一首好和,鼓掌! |
快手,你也来一首  |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2007-05-10 05:10:12 Post subject: |
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忱谢白水兄赐和,感谢晓松兄协助讨 ''债'',索和成功!
支持白水兄意见,晓松兄岂可袖手,也来一首. |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-05-10 05:14:43 Post subject: |
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黄洋界 wrote: |
忱谢白水兄赐和,感谢晓松兄协助讨 ''债'',索和成功!
支持白水兄意见,晓松兄岂可袖手,也来一首. |
好啊, 加油.
这个给冰清老师 |
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晓松 举人

Joined: 26 Feb 2007 Posts: 1192
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Posted: 2007-05-10 17:38:50 Post subject: |
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上面这么热闹,是来跟我讨债的。得,既然这样就作一首吧。
最羡枫园白水兄
诗词歌赋笑谈中
紧跟其后黄洋界
言志书怀唱大风 《七律 旅加书怀》
100磅的大锤怎么不停地打啊? |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-05-10 18:06:36 Post subject: |
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晓松 wrote: |
上面这么热闹,是来跟我讨债的。得,既然这样就作一首吧。
最羡枫园白水兄
诗词歌赋笑谈中
紧跟其后黄洋界
言志书怀唱大风 《七律 旅加书怀》
100磅的大锤怎么不停地打啊? |
那是100分  |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2007-05-10 18:16:03 Post subject: |
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酒债可赖,诗债难溜,拜读晓松兄和诗. |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2007-05-11 07:10:28 Post subject: |
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步原韵,再凑一首,以慰二兄唱 和 之劳.
晓松白水二仁兄,
信手拈来兴致中,
旭日青松添勝景,
淡如秋水蔚诗风. |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-05-11 18:46:05 Post subject: |
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谢谢了, 祝周末愉快.  |
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孙继廷 秀才
Joined: 21 Apr 2007 Posts: 115 Location: 吉林四平 孙继廷Collection |
Posted: 2007-05-12 03:45:50 Post subject: |
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热闹的地方不要错过,虽然无人索债.
一黄一白好弟兄
晓松朝日画图中
乐凑闲情续貂尾
北美枫里沐春风 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2007-05-12 08:04:36 Post subject: |
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谢谢孙兄清赏赐和,周末愉快
谢谢孙兄清赏赐和,周末愉快! |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-05-13 18:30:21 Post subject: |
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黄洋界 wrote: |
谢谢孙兄清赏赐和,周末愉快
谢谢孙兄清赏赐和,周末愉快! |
这中间留的 等填空呢  |
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kokho 进士出身

Joined: 30 Nov 2006 Posts: 2642 Location: Singapore kokhoCollection |
Posted: 2007-05-14 22:57:57 Post subject: |
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再支持
。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌 |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
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Posted: 2007-05-17 01:34:16 Post subject: |
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白水 Moonlight wrote: |
黄洋界 wrote: |
谢谢孙兄清赏赐和,周末愉快
谢谢孙兄清赏赐和,周末愉快! |
这中间留的 等填空呢  |
我来,凑热闹!
不言妯娌是弟兄
情暖声声慰寂零
君子神交情似水
悠然小调笑谈中 |
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晓松 举人

Joined: 26 Feb 2007 Posts: 1192
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Posted: 2007-05-17 18:34:42 Post subject: |
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孙继廷 wrote: |
热闹的地方不要错过,虽然无人索债.
一黄一白好弟兄
晓松朝日画图中
乐凑闲情续貂尾
北美枫里沐春风 |
冰清 wrote: |
我来,凑热闹!
不言妯娌是弟兄
情暖声声慰寂零
君子神交情似水
悠然小调笑谈中 |
欢迎孙继廷、冰清老师来凑热闹。
我再来凑一首,以助兴:
北美枫坛众弟兄
冰清白水在当中
你来索句寻佳对
他要唱和效古风 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-05-17 21:21:15 Post subject: |
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男女老少皆弟兄
信手东西南北中
平水新韵黑白调
喜怒哀乐今古风
五分钟临屏乱打, 各位诗友别打板子, 白水流了 |
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