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Posted: 2007-05-17 23:36:34 Post subject: 晨

晨暮一起通天晓尽眼绿波雾遥遥此意只有天早知后经愚人落目来

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Posted: 2007-05-17 23:43:36 Post subject:

意思是天刚一亮天都明亮了＂通天晓眼睛看到外面一片绿意远近各不相同＂遥遥这份大自然的美丽只有天早早的知道后来才让我看到的你看看是不是这回事呢 _________________ 我是个平凡的人，但我喜欢在平凡的日子里做不平凡的事情，每个人都可以这么来作去认为自己的存在。

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Posted: 2007-05-17 23:45:09 Post subject:

_________________ 我是个平凡的人，但我喜欢在平凡的日子里做不平凡的事情，每个人都可以这么来作去认为自己的存在。

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Posted: 2007-05-18 00:33:25 Post subject:

意思不错。韵脚再对照一下会更好的。请继续吧！

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