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[原创]古绝.晚餐美

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Posted: 2007-05-04 02:55:30 Post subject: [原创]古绝.晚餐美

[原创]古绝.晚餐美　　　　梦飞翁八棵菠菜四片姜，两只鸡蛋一碗汤。半张烙饼三两酒，晚来独酌亦小康！ _________________ 我愿意在这里结交更多的朋友，共同切磋学问，共同得以提高。希望大家多帮助我！谢谢！

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Posted: 2007-05-04 19:07:14 Post subject:

这也太惬意了。哈。羡慕。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-05-05 09:10:14 Post subject:

谢暗香雅评。闲暇戏作，一搏君笑耳！ _________________ 我愿意在这里结交更多的朋友，共同切磋学问，共同得以提高。希望大家多帮助我！谢谢！

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Posted: 2007-05-06 03:51:36 Post subject:

好,有趣.家乡饼论张不论两.乡味更浓

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Posted: 2007-05-06 07:25:11 Post subject:

孙继廷 wrote:

好,有趣.家乡饼论张不论两.乡味更浓

孙兄差矣。超市买饼，论两不论张啊。
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Posted: 2007-05-07 00:08:03 Post subject:

翁兄所言极是,弟乃井蛙之见矣

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Posted: 2007-05-07 04:52:53 Post subject:

孙继廷 wrote:

翁兄所言极是,弟乃井蛙之见矣

孙兄错怪了！弟实无不恭之意！弟之所指乃诗境之所在。今网上喜遇乡亲，真喜出望外矣！还望多多指教！
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Posted: 2007-05-07 04:55:08 Post subject:

孙继廷 wrote:

好,有趣.家乡饼论张不论两.乡味更浓

呵呵！思来想去还是孙公言之有理！改"张"字。
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Posted: 2007-05-07 16:33:14 Post subject:

买饼与井蛙之言,皆调侃戏言.翁兄不必多虑

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Posted: 2007-05-08 06:37:52 Post subject:

孙继廷 wrote:

买饼与井蛙之言,皆调侃戏言.翁兄不必多虑

我那“二两”与上边“两只”有合掌之嫌，改“半张”既消除此嫌，又消除了“张、两”之纠葛，一举两得，岂不善哉！呵呵！
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Posted: 2007-05-08 07:11:29 Post subject:

来学习。问好！ _________________ syr@shiyanren.com 冷巉湖北省十堰市茅箭区三堰邮政小区48号信箱 442000

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Posted: 2007-05-08 07:23:22 Post subject:

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来学习。
问好！

哈哈！老乡！谢谢赏评！
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