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背影

风动松柏
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风动松柏Collection

Posted: 2007-05-06 05:19:37 Post subject: 背影

背影山飞翔，鸟飞翔，云飞翔竹无声，树无声，思想无声车向前，人向前，身向前路接路，门对门，天空阔昨天是你，今天是你，明天是你昨天飞了，今天飞了，明天飞了昨天是你，今天不是你，明天不是你山不是昨天的山，河流不是昨天的河流让思想说话，让思惟说话，让智慧说话山摇过，竹摇过，树摇过，地动过，天飞了 _________________ 我爱是因为有所不爱

沙漠
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Joined: 26 Jan 2007
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Location: 中国温州
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Posted: 2007-05-06 07:04:39 Post subject:

个人觉得：竹无声，身向前，让思惟说话，竹摇过——这些不要看上去就简洁多了。有禅意！ _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

江晨
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Joined: 22 Feb 2007
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Posted: 2007-05-06 07:06:43 Post subject:

白描 _________________ 中国龙泉剑瓷文化网:http://www.lqjcwh.com/ 我的博客网址： http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1246181482 http://aaabc888.bokee.com/ 我的创作室网址：http://www.zjlm.net/web/web_article.asp?wid=214

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