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生活里的小

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-05-14 15:32:14 Post subject: 生活里的小

生活里的小我爱生活里的小那些被生活激流冲到角落里的砂砾就像失足跌进石缝的种子道路布满了贫困与艰难就像一群老鼠胆怯而谦卑地活在鄙夷的目光里就像刘凯他下岗了老婆走了仍跛着脚打理着自己破烂的生活我爱生活里的低那些大风吹来时低下沉重头颅的向日葵那些被早晨的露水打湿飞得比青草还要低的翅膀那些活在青草根里的蚯蚓、蚂蚁和蝗虫为他们的爱情所感动隔壁的那个失去双腿的小矮人每天早晨都拖着半截身体把一碗碗茶摆在通往乡村的大路上我更爱生活里的痛那些突然楔进生活里的钉子从伤口里流出的咸它们在时光里打磨着刀刃随时给生命一击我爱着母亲病痛的黑夜多少年的呻吟挤破了乡下的土屋我爱着父亲送我时眼里汹涌出的泪水像不小心打破的暖水瓶我爱着生活里的这些小、低和痛爱着这些卑微和怜悯从里面不停地打捞一些叫黄金的东西 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-05-14 15:45:31 Post subject:

生活很沉重给人震撼的感觉 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

白水
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Posted: 2007-05-14 17:11:17 Post subject:

把眼睛投向平实的群体, 笔下就有了引发共鸣的诗歌

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-05-14 21:16:53 Post subject:

要在苦难中透射力量。否则就是诗人在斤斤乐道中“把玩”苦难。海军努力。艰难和困苦没有给我带来任何好处，它只给了我一颗同情苦难并勇于征服苦难的心——泰戈尔。 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

kokho
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Posted: 2007-05-14 22:58:24 Post subject:

拜读　支持。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

品玉
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Posted: 2007-05-15 00:06:53 Post subject:

学习了!站在屋顶看生活,从泥沙里过滤心声. _________________ 孤独的执烛者，在黑暗的水面上留下火苗的伤口～～～～～

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-05-15 05:14:58 Post subject:

谢和平岛、白水、少君、kokho、品玉五位诗人点评！不胜感激！祝各位愉快！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-05-15 20:10:48 Post subject:

我更爱生活里的痛那些突然楔进生活里的钉子从伤口里流出的咸 _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-05-15 22:28:57 Post subject:

谢阿依琼裙诗人！！多来发诗和回帖！祝好！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

孙继廷
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Posted: 2007-05-15 23:48:55 Post subject:

沉稳而沉重！！

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-05-16 06:15:49 Post subject:

谢诗人！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-05-16 06:40:39 Post subject:

来学习！并问好

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