白水
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 Posted: 2013-06-30 22:02:02 Post subject: 花语*蔷薇（写点轻松的） |
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七绝《蔷薇*诗魂》
睥睨尘寰悄吐蕊，悠然怡苑绽芳菲
清魂雅魄谁相似？李杜挥毫你举杯
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白水
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| Posted: 2013-06-30 22:09:33 Post subject: |
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晓松
举人
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| Posted: 2013-06-30 23:11:55 Post subject: |
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| 清新淡雅的诗，赏心，漂亮美丽的花，悦目。假日快乐！ |
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白水
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| Posted: 2013-06-30 23:15:37 Post subject: |
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七绝《蔷薇*诗雨》
长夜难眠凝烛泪？低吟浅叹醉三更
清风不拭潇潇雨，唯愿陪君待日升
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白水
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| Posted: 2013-06-30 23:24:21 Post subject: |
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| 晓松 wrote: |
清新淡雅的诗，赏心，漂亮美丽的花，悦目。假日快乐！
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一曲刚罢见晓松，屏前一乐喜相逢
顺手拈来花几朵，待君墨题刺玫红
节日快乐
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hepingdao
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| Posted: 2013-06-30 23:48:00 Post subject: |
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昨日郊游又钓蟹，
明月半弯伴酒眠。
忽闻晓松琵琶曲，
原是白水敲梦帘。
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qinghongh
榜眼
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| Posted: 2013-06-30 23:53:24 Post subject: |
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随手摘得花几朵，窗开忽见晓松来。
香风阵阵熏人醉，浓淡诗行梦里猜。
节日同乐! |
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白云闲人
探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466
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| Posted: 2013-07-01 00:08:35 Post subject: |
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李杜揮毫你举杯 - 好句，欣赏！
花艳诗美！
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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白云闲人
探花
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| Posted: 2013-07-01 00:11:50 Post subject: |
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晓松琵琶曲，白水敲梦帘 - 精彩！
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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白云闲人
探花
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| Posted: 2013-07-01 00:15:29 Post subject: |
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香风阵阵、浓淡诗行 - 生动有趣！
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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晓松
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| Posted: 2013-07-01 01:44:11 Post subject: |
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| 白水 Moonlight wrote: |
一曲刚罢见晓松，屏前一乐喜相逢
顺手拈来花几朵，待君墨提刺玫红
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刺玫花开分外红，洛阳公子倾慕中。
绿叶浅深来相衬，水珠照影韵味浓。 |
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晓松
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| Posted: 2013-07-01 01:48:20 Post subject: |
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| hepingdao wrote: |
昨日郊游又钓蟹，
明月半弯伴酒眠。
忽闻晓松琵琶曲，
原是白水敲梦帘。
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拿来钓蟹惹人馋，一夜翻身未入眠。
晨起直奔宝箱去，空空如也泪欲潸。 |
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晓松
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| Posted: 2013-07-01 01:53:07 Post subject: |
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| qinghongh wrote: |
随手摘得花几朵，窗开忽见晓松来。
香风阵阵熏人醉，浓淡诗行梦里猜。
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梦中喜见刺玫开，白水轻盈把花摘。
岛主庆宏各一朵，还会送谁费疑猜。 |
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白水
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| Posted: 2013-07-01 02:06:57 Post subject: |
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| hepingdao wrote: |
昨日郊游又钓蟹，
明月半弯伴酒眠。
忽闻晓松琵琶曲，
原是白水敲梦帘。
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忽闻晓松琵琶曲--清晨松涛抚琴，嵌名贴切，自然
原是白水敲梦帘。--有大水冲了龙王庙之嫌 |
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白水
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| Posted: 2013-07-01 02:19:56 Post subject: |
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| qinghongh wrote: |
随手摘得花几朵，窗开忽见晓松来。
香风阵阵熏人醉，浓淡诗行梦里猜。
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不用猜啦：1）诗歌为文学之冠，美如花：2）诗人敏锐犀利，带刺的花；3）不超脱静心，难得好诗。蔷薇远离喧嚣，第次吐蕊。与诗人是否相似？ |
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白水
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| Posted: 2013-07-01 02:41:09 Post subject: |
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晓松出口成章，唱和如流，当为第一轮状元。庆宏点墨入绝，绝中有花，当为榜眼。peace题诗无花，不绝，念其第一时间和诗，排位探花。白水七绝与花容玉照形神相映，比如：第一首花蕾如笔，花开如杯；第二首花露如烛泪（就吹吧 ）暂居判官职位  其实各位水平都比我高，搞笑而已。
鉴于各位水平，下一轮比赛要求高点，形似，神似，写哪朵花请告知编号，我帮你们贴到诗歌后面。激将一下，真写起来挡不住信马由缰 |
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hepingdao
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| Posted: 2013-07-01 03:13:35 Post subject: |
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一朵玫瑰一匹狼
披着白云去牧羊
哪得伊人白如许
独占花魁打油郎
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晓松
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| Posted: 2013-07-01 11:41:04 Post subject: |
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响应白水兄的提议，既然热闹就热闹几天，信马由缰了，就选第4号：
低首娇羞露粉腮，侬家心事倩谁猜？
只期如意郎君至，携手临风一起开。 |
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晓松
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| Posted: 2013-07-01 12:41:38 Post subject: |
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一朵玫瑰一匹狼
披着白云去牧羊
哪得伊人白如许
独占花魁打油郎
岛主，够样！
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SLIU
秀才
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| Posted: 2013-07-01 15:30:55 Post subject: |
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好美的花，忍不住凑两句。。
七绝
谁家庭院沐朝晖
细细枝头竟芳菲
更有露灵添异彩
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