影沉寒水 举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2016-02-03 01:26:27 Post subject: 七律•年末感题 |
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七律•年末感题
岁终倍感客方囚,摭忆有谁盟鹭鸥。
浊酒穿壶迷海色,扁舟带月遣乡愁。
波吟醉且喧嚣去,剑傲何当寂寞求?
若斩浮华千里外,众生不改稻粱谋。 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2016-02-03 02:08:59 Post subject: |
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是啊,生存第一位。 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
qinghonghCollection |
Posted: 2016-02-03 14:31:00 Post subject: |
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感慨良多 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2016-02-03 17:18:25 Post subject: |
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颔联、颈联韵美意深。 _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
冰清Collection |
Posted: 2016-02-03 19:52:02 Post subject: |
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有愁有醉,有却有谋!——感题不浅不俗啊。
问候新春! |
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影沉寒水 举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2016-02-04 02:16:00 Post subject: |
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谢谢阅读支持,问好。 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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连南河 秀才
Joined: 30 Aug 2008 Posts: 342 Location: Toronto 连南河Collection |
Posted: 2016-02-07 08:15:09 Post subject: |
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问候新春! _________________ 一路雨丝一路风 |
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