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[远嫁的女儿]等最近几首,请大家批批~:)

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-05-01 09:40:33 Post subject: [远嫁的女儿]等最近几首,请大家批批~:)

93、一幅画云荡风轻的天边展翅的鹰博弈黄昏殿堂圣歌打破夜的沉寂多么动容的画啊斜斜地挂着扁移的重心在梦中呻吟枕上，一缕乌发湿了 2007-4-29 94、写给四月的书四月，你这多情善良的男子手执春风，万丈热情你携裹细雨，沐浴万物四野里百花齐放你看，樱桃红了枇杷黄了连草莓也株胎暗结将妒与羡孕成一枚酸酸甜甜的心四月，烈日灼伤的蝶夜幕下背负灰暗的斑把古老的爱情奏成一曲忧伤而沉默的歌 2007-4-30 95、远嫁的女儿母亲，你将自己送上三月的行程遥远的塞外，翻过那道梁子你白发的亲娘如一截行将老朽的树躺在破落的村庄里被时光点了笑穴的老人记忆里的亲人正被渐渐掏空母亲啊，你这远嫁的女儿挑着沉重和苦难的嫁妆柔嫩的肩上烙上生活的茧疤旧日的贫瘠使你无力孝养娘亲愧疾长成你心中永久的刺母亲，如今我也远嫁城市里反哺养育恩情当我拉你选购衣衫你不是嫌贵就是脸红脖粗求售货小姐便宜点，再便宜点半夜里，你偷偷穿上新装幽暗的镜中映出你苍白的笑容女儿心里就一个劲地酸母亲，你我都是远嫁的女儿远方傻傻的笑是亲人对你的召唤你将在这无痛苦和烦恼的笑声中完成你年轻时无力承担的苦难而我，母亲，我要残忍地对你说：若干年后，请千万别这样傻笑我宁愿你，能骂能恨能流泪但千万别——把亲人遗忘 2007-4-30 96、今天五一全国人民欢庆五一唯我晃在清冷的上班途中你说：劳动节就该劳动向你致敬！嘿嘿，那我就劳动三天辛苦并不算啥重要的是咱们得向党员看齐过了后天你们上班我来写诗 2007-5-1

白水
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Posted: 2007-05-01 17:20:04 Post subject:

月亮, 你的诗歌越来越多情了. 白水兄好感动

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-05-01 20:31:04 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

月亮, 你的诗歌越来越多情了. 白水兄好感动 Wink

哈哈,抱抱白水兄,抱抱月光妹妹!节日好! Very Happy

冷水
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Posted: 2007-05-01 23:08:47 Post subject:

喜欢远嫁的女儿这个，看的鼻子也酸了． _________________ 越来越蠢

阿依琼裙
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Posted: 2007-05-02 01:14:40 Post subject:

也喜欢远嫁的女儿,感情至深~~~ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2007-05-02 02:29:15 Post subject:

扁移的重心在梦中呻吟枕上，一缕乌发湿了 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-05-02 05:52:39 Post subject:

冷水 wrote:

喜欢远嫁的女儿这个，看的鼻子也酸了．

问好冷水诗人~节日愉快!

许蔚
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Posted: 2007-05-02 06:25:14 Post subject:

枕上，一缕乌发湿了

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-05-03 06:00:32 Post subject:

许蔚 wrote:

枕上，一缕乌发湿了

谢赏读,问好!

上城
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Posted: 2007-05-04 10:50:54 Post subject:

多愁善感的你. _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

沙漠
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Posted: 2007-05-04 23:05:25 Post subject:

93语言精炼，颇有张力。95感情动人。不错！ _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

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