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时间系列之十一：岁月射出冷箭

时东兵
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Posted: 2015-11-17 15:14:15 Post subject: 时间系列之十一：岁月射出冷箭

时间系列之十一：岁月射出冷箭一些残存的枯枝吟出悲壮的颂歌意义捣成碎叶王者不堪一击秋风所破的茅屋不仅倒塌在唐朝辽阔的土地雪的朝代更替谁能跳出火焰太阳已深陷其中谁比干柴爆裂月亮缺损已久没有姓氏的鱼从历史深处游来李白的一壶酒把唐诗喝尽岁月弯弓射箭一去不回头每天在镜子前轻轻唤回自己镜向抒写大自然呈现丰富多彩诗挺直身躯历史才能站起来欢迎光临时东兵的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1246222181

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Posted: 2015-11-17 22:35:22 Post subject:

句子承轉有些斷落，但仍有意思。

Quote:

谁能跳出火焰
太阳已深陷其中
谁比干柴爆裂

比干（人名），可錯覺中斜出意義。
（伍子逢殃兮, 比干菹醢。——《楚辞·屈原·涉江》）

Quote:

没有姓氏的鱼
从历史深处游来
李白的一壶酒
把唐诗喝尽

若是換成：
没有历史的鱼
从姓氏深处游来
李白的詩天上來
將唐酒喝尽

可借將進酒。淺斟酌
_________________
（在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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