笑聊
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 Posted: 2015-11-13 17:31:02 Post subject: 绝句-巡塘古镇游有感 |
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临屏唱和：（一）
石径平添弯曲愁，暗香轻吻小溪秋。
不知古镇何时在，醉眼彷徨无理由。
溪边渔翁原玉：
远向纤云缕缕柔，巡塘天气晚来秋。
菊香杏叶添金色，今古风情一望收。
临屏唱和：（二）
小溪水淌韵悠悠，古道清风拂晚秋。
怀远人前来去客，桂香飘逸过西楼。
溪边渔翁原玉：
怀古道中风寂幽，尚贤一曲弄清秋。
孔桥石板霜痕在，静水临窗过小楼。 |
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黄洋界
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| Posted: 2015-11-14 09:07:43 Post subject: |
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唱和皆佳，古镇韵悠。
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2015-11-14 17:27:59 Post subject: |
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| 古镇风情，跃然诗中。 |
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笑聊
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| Posted: 2015-11-16 00:30:09 Post subject: |
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问候黄老！
谢谢赏评！ |
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笑聊
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| Posted: 2015-11-16 00:30:47 Post subject: |
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| qinghongh wrote: |
| 古镇风情，跃然诗中。 |
问候庆宏兄！
谢谢赏评！ |
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