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词二首沁园春·尼亚加拉、声声慢·密西西比
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PostPosted: 2015-09-27 04:46:47    Post subject: 词二首沁园春·尼亚加拉、声声慢·密西西比 Reply with quote

沁园春•尼亚加拉瀑布
十里奔雷,千米横流,断岸摇虹。叹天公造物,何其伟烈;地母钟灵,构此奇雄。直坠长河,蒸腾块玉,一扫凡音万籁空。潮头立,看排天水势,冲决鸿蒙。  电梯徐下深穹,并汽艇雨衣争浪锋。更银鸥万翼,穿帘逐舰;琼珠千椟,走板敲篷。褫服风鞭,蒙头雨絮,对面呼哗若哑聋。清凉夜,有彩灯遥射,疑是仙踪。

声声慢•密西西比河上游
三州交汇,一水长流,蓝桥横断江风,浅浪微黄,晴丘两岸葱茏。红尘霭然百丈,拥小城绣户雕栊。伫高阁,看奔来万象,争悦吾躬。  何必临河作赋,趁情高兴广,信步雍容。莫效高人,萧骚指点英雄。胸宽自归众派,小山溪难纳奔洪。堪笑我,半闲生涯客途中。
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PostPosted: 2015-09-27 07:04:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

以如椽之笔,绘气势恢宏美景。
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PostPosted: 2015-09-27 09:31:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

豪放好词.我也曾写过尼亚加拉瀑布,以和诗友:

七绝 尼亚加拉大瀑布

蓄势高崖喷涌下,雷鸣百里声威隆。
巨帘遥挂云端上,谁点朱砂绘彩虹?
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PostPosted: 2015-09-28 16:52:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

巴公功力不凡,令人叹服。佳节愉快!
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PostPosted: 2015-10-05 21:13:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

豪情不减,江山指点,一切尽在胸帏之中。赞!
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PostPosted: 2015-10-07 05:33:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢诗友鼓励!
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