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sfiawong
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 Posted: 2009-07-10 15:57:15 Post subject: 創作 《詩怎麼樣寫?》 |
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創作 《詩怎麼樣寫?》
學人寫古詩,
平仄不對譜,
人即說孤平,
再讀又說無詩味,
哎,我不是李白,
平仄喎, 古詩怎樣寫?
新詩我會試著寫,
老實人, 的我不敢放屁,
為什麼? 呵! 怕嗅死了你。
聽說新詩有規律。
老實的人, 我又給嚇得要死!
又有規律, 新詩怎樣寫?
左又難,右又難.,
今不是,古不是。
呀,到此! 不如寫打油詩!?
我不是詩人, 我不是杜李。
我只想寫出, 自己的感受。
寫出美好的世界,
寫出人們苦與樂。
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sfiawong
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| Posted: 2009-07-10 16:24:19 Post subject: |
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寫舊體詩似乎很難,但又不甘願放棄,目前新詩有取代古詩的趨勢.尤其是散文詩,似詞的文體,台灣又倡起十句行體,有必要麼?應是自由詩較可行,多人接受.什麼十四行,統統都不成氣候,十四行太與外國古詩跟風了,又不為華人接受,還是自由的詩章好...只要有特色,有內涵..那怕沒有攑場客?!
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赵福治
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| Posted: 2009-07-10 16:51:03 Post subject: |
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| 有打油的味道，周末好. |
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sfiawong
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| Posted: 2009-07-10 19:19:41 Post subject: |
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謝,謝,趙 君的評語,...它類似打油吧...!
寫得好的打油並不易,例如魯迅經常都有佳作出現.
好的打油其實很考功夫,都算適合現代繁忙的生活.
那有空慢慢想着平仄的尺度.我倒喜歡古體'賦'的寫法,
賦是直接切入內容,不用平仄之規限,比較自由的寫.
理應是有韻的散文,這不是很好的散文和詩的兼顧麼? 
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