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四月，或者桃花

诗之剑
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Joined: 20 Feb 2007
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Posted: 2007-04-30 08:49:45 Post subject: 四月，或者桃花

四月，或者桃花 ——诗之剑好想让流逝以你的方式流一回自己的泪可是你却笑了那份由衷的粲然让你的面孔成为我目光的封面可我又怕你逐渐远去的背影成为我奢侈的书签可爱的正是因为你那顾盼神飞的色彩像少女唇膏下的无言使人望而却步而你那葱翠欲滴的碧意又像是必然的旋律作为灵魂的绿灯…… 是啊还有你那不可忽略的倒影是曾经渴望搁置已久的摇篮可是时间的督促谁知道你那令人如痴如醉的芳香是不是我眷恋已在途中的灵柩……

韩少君
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Joined: 06 Apr 2007
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Posted: 2007-04-30 12:28:49 Post subject: 问好

阅过，还可精致。有修改余地。感情很真。情为诗之本，言为诗之叶。 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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